Reviews for The Trouble With Past Lives |
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Davera chapter 11 . 6/18/2019 I hope you haven't given up on the story and hope you will update it at some point |
Remnant's Spartan chapter 11 . 2/14/2019 Please return to this story I'm dying for more and could there possibly be lemons in the future between Nabiki and Kushina |
Guest chapter 11 . 2/1/2019 I LOVE this |
Monster King chapter 11 . 6/16/2017 It was a good story shame that it looks like you gave up on it. |
Reymen chapter 3 . 10/10/2016 Why would Kushina ever attempt teaching Nabiki to fight? So much waste of resources. Teach her chakra controll, teach her to run perhaps. Then place her in a administrative post. Or if not trusted enough, give her a starting capital and let her try to run a shop or a buisness empire. One of the part I dislike about Naruto world is the idea that genius are only good as front line fighters. It is so short sightet. Sure if you are in a war or are missing people. But except that push them to development or education. |
Vangran chapter 11 . 9/12/2016 Ah Naruto, you have no idea how right you are. Although, you're a bit more closely related then even you thought. Critique: It's Zanbato not Zanpakuto. Zanpakutos are from Bleach while Zanbatos are like what Zabuza uses. Case-in-point the blade he uses is a Zanbato. |
1Billy-234 chapter 11 . 12/1/2015 are you going to finish this story? |
Aurora - Kitsune Lord Of Fire chapter 5 . 11/17/2015 Damn filthy Kishimoto lovers. |
Guest chapter 11 . 6/8/2015 L.m.f.a.o. that was funny and messy at the same update. |
ERay316 chapter 11 . 5/11/2015 Why do all the good fanfics die just as they're getting interesting? |
scranity chapter 6 . 2/14/2015 "Long story short, Aunt Nabiki and our mother aren't really related by blood." "Long story short, my mother is willing to look at..." This may seem petty, but I can't bear to like this chapter at all because you used this phrase twice in (almost) a row. It just sounds really really weird. |
KasumiKeiko chapter 11 . 1/31/2015 Great story, too bad it has been 4 yrs |
Guest chapter 3 . 9/21/2014 why not her mother it woud give her a chance at better life as well |
SoulboundAlchemist chapter 11 . 9/12/2014 This fic had better not be dead, otherwise I swear that I will hunt you down and torture the next chapters out of you! |
maryjane5000 chapter 11 . 9/6/2014 Hmmm only three women I can think of in the Ranmaverse that deserves pity Nodoka her son is dead & daughter (more or less) prefers the other world Kasumi the only two people to treat her as a human being & not a slave left her behind Miss Hinako Ranma treated her with respect dispite her age unlike the rest of the class |