I've enjoy this story, but your last update was October 2009. Does this mean you have discontinued/abandoned this story? I would be sad if you did, but I know that greater stories will come. Thank you.

I loved this story! Great job! Dumbledore probably sensed Harry and Ron through occlumency.

This is an extremely interesting start to the series, and I look forward to seeing how you tie in Harry to the Ancients, and the Goauld. As for the Cloak problems you mentioned, I believe the most common explanation is that Dumbledore can find Harry under the Cloak because he has the Elder Wand, and Moody's Eye was enchanted by Dumbles. BTW, are you going to involve any of the other HP characters? I personally think that Hermione would get along great with Sam and Janet Frasier.

Good story so far

Very good prologue.
It s rare to see a prologue such as this which is actually just a prologue,
without the utter cr*p that most writers put in.

nice

i like this story

Love it plz update.

The ascending curse then? Bad idea, so very bad.

The ascended child raper? Seems like it's bound to end bad. The ancients with their petty laws might stop one or two rouge ascended, but thousands? Get real

Lol please update soon

What does Teal'c think of him? And how is the Order handling Harry's disappearance?

I like it

Dang... excellent story so far, it's a shame it looks to be abandoned (year plus for last update)

Will add to favorites & alerts anyway, in the hope that you continue.

dundundun... you should uipdate cause it'd be pretty awesome to see where this is going

4/5

I just wanted to say this is an excellent story, with very few mistakes that I could see. It has an interesting plot like, both amusing and capturing. I do hope you continue this story in the future, and am awaiting eagerly for the next chapter (even though it's been a while :D)