I really like this. I had to read the last half a few times to let it sink in. There seems to be a contradiction here between forces binding and a sort of freedom. I really like the celestial imagery. Thanks for sharing!

Fantastic, as usual. M, the whole thing was so pretty, and that's a pretty shallow compliment, I know, but I love that words can go together not just to paint a pretty picture, but make pretty sounds when they're read in the mind and that's exactly what this does.

I think my favorite line,hm..."I cannot run; this kite, my dreams, may not fly" Just great. Two thumbs up!