Loved this one shot... It was very well written. Thank you!

Wow. Just wow. Need some air conditioning.

Kyaaaaa I so love this!

This one shot was really good I love stories pertaining pon-far and my only thing is that I would of like if their mating to be more descriptive XD but other than that the story was great!

as i wrote years ago:

I'm sorry that I have no constructive criticism that my English is not good enough.
But how do you describe the tension between Jim and Spock, how Spock is fighting within himself. It was mesmerizing.
It's something good I want you to know

Thanks for that !

Loved this :)

Jim refuses to allow anything to intrude on the sheer perfection that is this moment and so, really, the rest of the world can go to hell

Amen :)

This is totally utterly awesome and poignant and delicious! One other word did come to mind, near the end... Ouch! unprepped entry! _;

AWESOME!

So like Spock Prime to plan for everything!

LOL

I really, really enjoyed your fic! *grins*

Whoa...I love your tone. In the middle of the plot, you could put cows and I would still laugh and favorite this. Great job!

Cramped text, but goddamn this was enjoyable. Had me hooked from the first sentence. And as I looked at your other fics, I can see that you made the paragraphs purposely longer, so... well. Truth be told it was a bit hard to read but that maybe because my sight is bad.

Also, since no one in this fandom (save for me) seems to care, I'm saying this in every review I leave: Vulcans' body temperature is lower than humans'. That means that their skin feels cool to touch, and it's a fact. Their bodies do however store the warmth much better than humans', so I'm guessing that in the conditions of their planet (and in Spock’s room like in this fic) their skin would feel warm.

Anyway, thank you for your intensive take on Spock's and Jim's relationship. It was truly marvellous.

Loved it!

Great fic!