I love this story! Will there be any more chapters? I hope there will be :]

Really kool! i love the idea! (so where's my cookie and gold stars? jk :))

I haven't received my gold stars or cookies yet. But since I love your story I'll live. For now. Well keep writing.

I love it. The story's great and the way your writing with two people and one writes and the other edits that's just like me and my friend that's how were writing this story. But anyway keep writing cause this has really caught my attention now.

P.S Do I get my gold stars and cookie.

the sroty's excellent so far!keep writing!:D

that was pretty interesting

update soon

-luna

*Looks around wildly*. Only one person reviewed this? *gapes*. I don't know what to say. You're writing style is, simply put, immpeceble beyond belief, you never stray out of perspective, (so many people who write in this pov, no mattre how many, ususally mess up), and the discription is wonderful, please, please update soon! *Gives puppy dog eyes*

interesting. shame no one else has seen this, really. keep up the good work, and update soon

-luna