Wow I really liked it.

Loved this Edward! he was dark, sexy, possessive and he killed alice and emmett, loved it.

i really really LOVE it !please continue it !i beg you..!

AnthousaVamplover9,

xo xo

Ooooo, Edward is a bad, bad boy! Killing off Emmett, Angela and Alice. And unleashing his vampire voodoo on Bella! Not the "vegetarian" Edward we know and love. You should consider continuing this story to a full length story, I know I'd read it!

That was awesome

wow! this was a fantastic piece of work, i really enjoy the intense emotions your painted.

Ohhh

Harsh fast dark and maybe Edward in this tale is just a touch too bitter for my taste - almost Volturi like

Well written

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Reb

A dark, evil Edward! So different! And he could play all inside her mind. Nice touch!

Enjoyed reading it. Another one of your stories was recommended to me as well. I will have to read that too.

That was intense, but very good. I really enjoyed it. I always enjoy a dominant Edward.

Hey jarielynn,

Great story. I'm sorry I didn't get to you sooner and I know I'm too late but I've been busy writing my first fanfic and posting it.

I really do like it though if that's any consulation.

Cool story. I liked it!

This is a really good Darkward one-shot. He is definitely more of a traditional vampire, not thinking of killing anyone who got in the way of he and his. I really enjoyed reading this.

Good one!

very good story!

Very Nice! I thoroughly enjoyed it.