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   Lunary chapter 9 . 1/31/2016 Okay good written. Not sure how it turns out but I hope has a chance to either get a happy end or die the way he choose to go even if it's hard for the team. I hope for a happy end but in the end even if he get's better he should at least be as lethal as Ziva now because I doubt he will be able to forget everything. Regards, Lunary |
| randomplotbunny chapter 9 . 11/12/2014 Fabulous! |
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/23/2014 It's strange that this story is in honor of EF. She finishes her stories. |
| Unayan chapter 9 . 5/12/2013 I absolutely love Enthusiastic Fish's work. I just finished reading "How the Strong Man Stumbled" and it was blew me away. This is also very good and I hope you continue it. :) |
| JerryF chapter 9 . 5/4/2013 Great story hope you continue it and tell us more. Thanks for a great read. |
| C.H.W.13 chapter 9 . 2/22/2013 This is a really good story! You should really continue with it! I really do want to know what happens next! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! LOVE IT!:) |
| Mikhyel chapter 8 . 1/29/2013 Oh crap. It's a problem when I'm hoping that they ONLY made McGee kill someone... (By the way, do you know the song "A Tale They Won't Believe" by Weddings Parties Anything? It's about Alexander Pearce, and it's also a really good song.) |
| Mikhyel chapter 7 . 1/29/2013 Holy crap that's creepy. This Jarrod guy is seriously messed up. |
| Westie80 chapter 9 . 3/9/2012 Please update and finish this story |
| MadamShinigami chapter 9 . 11/2/2011 Decided to read this again and hoping for an update. |
| MysteryFan15 chapter 9 . 8/26/2011 This is going to sound dumb but I lost this story for a while. I remembered reading it a while ago but then it fell off my radar and I couldn't remember the name or who wrote it. Now I've found it. :) Poor Tim, makes me want to give him a hug. I hope you are planning on continuing the story. I would love to see him heal from this if he can. |
| TwistedRocketPower chapter 9 . 5/25/2011 Do you plan to continue this story? You really should. It's really good :) |
| TwistedRocketPower chapter 3 . 5/25/2011 This story is great! I'm loving it... This line : "Pulling his hair out in clumps, dozens of tiny slashing cuts, smearing the blood they drew over him, drawing pictures, taunting him" ...I don't know if you noticed, but it kinda rhymes :) It kinda sounds like a mini-poem within the story :) Love it! |
| Lidil chapter 9 . 4/29/2011 Good, strong start. Look forward to the rest. |
| timid madam red chapter 6 . 2/2/2011 you no longer want to finish this story? |
