veeeeery cute. made me want to squeal.
i particularly liked the sepiroth part. and the showdown in the second chapter, everybody wanting cloud. :-)

awwww! 'capture the cloud'! :-)
now i want a chibi-cloud too. to hug and cuddle.. *dreamy eyes*

Please update your stories.
They're too good to be left unfinished.
At least let the community know that your not dead!

Gosh! this was so much fun to read. Thank you so much for writing this!

Now if rufus was to wonder in to the situation...anyways well written

I know it's an older fic, but WHY IS THERE NO MORE OF THIS? THIS IS COMEDY GOLD!

this story is ADORABLE! Love it

Aww I love this, it was so cute and funny. Like seriously my face hurts from smiling so much.

XD Oh. My. God... . This is so funny I can't stop laughing! I actually hurt from laughing so hard and I'm getting a headache from it too. XD I well and truly look forward to the next update. And go Angeal! That was just awesome. Amazing flow and practically perfect grammar, you have me hooked. - Wish I could see a pic of how Cloud looks right now though... Anyways, I truly look forward to when you next update. :)

Dear god, I DIED! So funny! XD

A really nice and funny story.
1sunfun

OH MY GOSH THIS IS THE MOST ADORABLE THING. I couldn't stop laughing, thank you!

Oh my God, please tell me you're gonna finish this? This is one of the most hilarious/cutest things I've ever seen!

Hahaha, this is hilarious! All of them fighting over who gets to take Cloud was priceless!

This story is really cute and really funny.