Aw! That was sweet! 3 Mori is so awesome

lol, poor Mori

:o... :o... :D

I LOVED THAT!

3 It was so cute, so...fluffy, yet had the perfect amount of smut that was not too overpowering for little Honey! Gret work!

This fic was O.K. you did not show an excessive amount of emotion, actually in this story, there was very little emotion shown from the two characters. Without emotion, the story becomes slightly bland. I saw some with Mori, and I suggest you work on developing this more. I also see a high potential for this story to be continued. Do not leave this unfinished just to tease your readers. I believe that you can add plot and add many more chapters. Later it will become easier to add emotion. This fic scores 6 out of 10, for the excellent idea of playing with hats, and the lack of emotion. Despite the score, your fic is one of a kind, and is extremely interesting to read.

heheh i like it

Very good, I like it... can't wait for more

I like this, even though it's very hard to imagine Honey in smut.

Love the story! cute and smut filled! i love hunny in thes story please write more storys!

-Flamez-is-Renji-Girl6-

AWW! CUTE!

Awe, Humorous, Sexy, and Cute. Altogether? Perfect.