Great start to the story, I look forward to reading more

Silly Cloud.. Aerith can read your mind! Best not to question the abilities of a.. Flower Picker person.. Yeah!

Can't wait till the next chapter ]

I really like the two chapters of your story so far _ I can't wait to see the rest of it! I'm not sure why there aren't more reviews.. It's a great story so far!

Now excuse me while I review the second chapter, because I liked that one too ;] *Review Bump FTW*

I -think- you're correct in assuming he isn't from there. Before fighting Sephiroth, he's wandering around the area where all the shops are. If you go up and talk to him, I'm pretty sure he says something about not being from there and not caring what happens to it, either... It's been a while, but I'm sure he does.

Thank you for another chapter! -Bows- It's great! I'll look forward to the next update!

And thanks for answering my question!(Kyaa~! Cloud is so cool!)

Nope, he's not. Wait...wasn't he from Yuffie, Aerith, and Cids home? Right...? I'm not sure. But this story seems good. I like stories in kingdom hearts that follow the aftermath of sorts. (Too many dang AU's IMO..) So keep it up! Good luck!

Ooh really liked this second chapter- Loved how you wrote Leon and Aerith's discussion about Cloud. Cloud was really well done in this chapter also, his actions and behaviour were just perfect.

Looking forward to the next chapter. _

? It needs more...

I enjoy this so far. Cloud's intense blue eyes can come save me any day! What are your personality goals for him? I also love it when he can be just as cool if not better than Leon. I've always thought him to be so. -Shrug- Dunno why. Not to say Leon doesn't kick major $$! I love him! I look forward to your next update! Until then, adieu!

(PS - I can definitely see the lab being destroyed from Yuffie. The computers should very well stay off-limits to her. Perfect characterization. Poor Squallers.)

This is a really good start! I hope you update this! I love it! _ *huggles*

Great intro chapter. Can't wait to see how Leon and Cloud deal with each other.

Ooh interesting first chapter, Cloud rescuing Leon and all. Looking forward to Leon actually being introduced to Cloud...Looking forward to next chapter. _