Just re-read this for the umptheenth time and still enjoy every bit of it! I would have left a review the first time I read it, but that was before I was brave enough...excellent job:)

Nice. Poor Marshall, lol.

I really liked it! Kept us on our toes... and Marshall getting attacked by a mountain lion... well... talk about unlucky!

True to characters, lots of action... great all round story!

Well done! Thank you!

I love Mary and Marshall!

Great story

You have no idea how I squealed when you mentioned Knoxville, considering I am from there.

...if only Marshall would crash down in the middle of the Smokey Mountains. I would surely come rescue him! haha

-Kaila Nicole

loved it..mary adn mashall bickering too funnya dn cute

great stuff

hugs

A very good story. I thought the characters stayed true to character and the banter was good between the marshals. I also liked the setting and the set up of the story.

Thank you for sharing with us.

Wonderfull story. I love stories with Marshall getting hurt and there was plenty of pain for him in this one :D

You also caught their voices very well. Especially for Marshall and Mary I could "hear" them very much like in the show.

Sometimes the reading-flow was a bit bumpy for me, because there seemed to have been several spelling errors. Since I'm not a native English speaker this always brings me out of the flow for a bit. But that's a minor point.

Overall I liked it very much. It's definately one of my favorites for this show now :)

I was only wondering if it's finished (because I had the feeling it is) or if there's more coming (because it's not marked complete).

Thanks a lot for writing and sharing!

I like how you added the info about the trees and such, gives you something a bit more to focus on, something to imagine them walking through, and the explanation on the gunshots. Great stuff.

Goodness, you posted this on Sunday and I completely missed it. Love the action and the way that you write Mary and Marshall, they're just so, well, them. I love it.

Love the story! Those two do know how to find trouble, don't they!

Ha! Lots of good Marshall and Mary humor among the action and drama! :)