How dare that hyuuuga

WHY IS EVERYTHING SO SAD
IM TRYING SO HARD NOT TO CRY
AND IM LISTENING TO AN EMOTIONAL SONG TOO

Hey i Like your story. But it has been more than a year since you haven't uploaded! Are u even planning on finishing this story!? If do NOT planning on finishing, people will start to unfollow you or write it as their own and finish it in their own way. If u r not going to finish the story let us know

Pls upload the rest of the chapters cause this is by far the best fanfiction I've ever read.
Loved it.

Can please keep going.

Update please

Hi! just passing by. Before anything else your have a good plot and all. Please dont misunderstand. Please take this as a constructive crticism from someone who really loves to read. Anyways, my point is from the begginning I DID love your story thought the time lapse and the lack of information. I REALLY WANTED to finish this fanfic but your story kinda lost it spark. Its because you dont have any real proof that Natsume did love Mikan. Neither do you have the tint of reality to fiction. I mean any person wont love anyone just because they had a kid and suddenly left him or her for years. I am really trying to find that as to how Natsumes feelins started. Please dont give us the time lapse. It is unfait and confusing. Ruka has much more base for his feelings. My point is yout story lacks basis for everything. So thats about it? Please dont take it this as an insult. You are nearly there. :) I mean no harm.

Natsume is always so stubborn lol luv this side story! Keep it up! Thx for ur hard work

Seriously , from Gekkan Shoujo Nozaki-kun... And it's a mixed character of mikoshiba and nozaki -_- Can't even imagine that T_T
Wish that i never watched Gekkan before i read this
Great Story and love it but i can't just seem to like the new character for i preferred original characters from the author

FINALLY UPDATED

It will be better if we could understand what Natsume went through the two year gap?

Natsume doesn't love Mikan when he gets her pregnant. Tho he gets jealous when he sees her with ruka, even tho he loves Yuki. Then a few years later he randomly is able to track her down and sexually harasses her, claims to own Mikan like she hasn't been independent-even tho she raised a kid by herself and Mikan is just a weak slut in this. Three year olds are stronger than this. If Mikan could deal with raising a kid, then she is obviously strong enough to stop it. She doesn't even think once to call the police, also natsume is the vastly wealthy one, because... Plot?

I can see all the makings of a drama here. By the way, a two year old is not capable of the level of communication that Kaoru is using.

I'm surprised Mikan hasn't run away yet. I would have.

Ooh. I'm so glad Natsume stayed determine to stay by her side:))) Ah, all because of her father, well the truth would be revealed soon. And 3 days? Yeah! I can't wait!