| Reviews for Inheritance |
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   Mizudoriko chapter 5 . 4/23/2017 The mentor is Severus, isn't it? |
| Aslinna chapter 20 . 4/10/2017 Please keep writing this story is awesome! |
| ThisIstheWaytheWorldEnds chapter 20 . 4/8/2017 I've been following this story for ages and was so happy to see another chapter that I reread the whole thing! I really like the direction the story has taken, although I'm surprised Dumbledore didn't stop Harry from leaving. It'll be interesting to see what is planned from now on! I can't wait! |
| Guest chapter 20 . 3/31/2017 Loving it. But voldie is kind of an add. You should give the elemantals more room to fight voldemort and use their abilities against him |
| TealMouse chapter 20 . 3/27/2017 This is so good I love how everything developed and flowed. :) |
| Noblesse976 chapter 20 . 3/26/2017 This story is amazing! I love the dynamics between all of the characters and how well you have kept the original characterization. I can't wait to read more! |
| breezygirl541 chapter 20 . 3/20/2017 Okay, so. This is so many levels of amazing I don't even know where to begin. I like the slow burn, and how everything is coming together. I love the idea as a whole, and who you chose. I'll admit, I totally thought Charlie was the elemental. Him as the mentor is even better somehow. I love stories with Percy and an attitude adjustment. I love how Harry is the unofficial official "leader" of the elementals, and how the Dark Lord is slowly coming back to himself. Hoe they represent him...It's all just amazing. I also love the elements you chose for them, and Harry as Earth is just so great. That one has always been my favorite, and I can't help but see him and Neville as plant Bros now. The father-son relationship of Severus and Harry is brilliant as well. I don't have anything I'll to say, outside I don't have more to read! But I understand this takes time, I hope you're continuing? I'll definitely be checking out your other works, and I hope you continue this one! Thank you for writing this, it's just... Magnificent. I have seen similar ideas, but I haven't seen them written well. I've only seen ones where Harry has all the elements or something and is also the next Merlin, a god and is suddenly six feet tall, muscled with some crazy hair and eyes colors etc. It's really nice to see an Elemental idea draw out to its full potential. Especially one with a catch like this, you have total control over an element but are bound to the Slytherin heir. I'm a bit curious how the first binding went. Did the elements consent? How did the previous heirs treat them? Sorry, I just kind of go off. Anyway! Thanks for writing this, and I'll be crossing my fingers for an update, even if it's a year from now. |
| ShadowLady89 chapter 20 . 3/19/2017 more pls |
| kronisfujo chapter 20 . 3/17/2017 holla your story is awsome... I cant wait LVHP moment... please update ... |
| Yona0 chapter 20 . 3/15/2017 The chapter went pretty well, I think. I love that Remus went with them in the end. And I could not predict it the Fire El was Percy just from the nick name Scorpion. How does that match? Love that too though, I've been meaning to get into a fic that puts Percy into an important position (not under Fudge). I'm seriously getting into this...I'm so curious how Voldemort will behave now, towards Harry and the Elements in separately and together. I'll be awaiting the next chapter~ Ciao ciao! |
| Ms.Spirit chapter 1 . 3/15/2017 Please... update... please |
| Ms.Spirit chapter 1 . 3/15/2017 Please... update... please |
| Rei.Avi chapter 20 . 3/8/2017 Wonderful story... 0 read this stright away from chap 1-20. . . Can't wait for the next chap. Truly amazing |
| Blueswan1422 chapter 20 . 3/3/2017 Pleassssse update! I love your fic! Harry's just badass enough ;) |
| raccoon-eyeliner chapter 20 . 2/28/2017 Has this been abandoned? |
