Nice. I wish I knew if people were still assigned jobs. Looks like Lily should be the one imprisoned.

Oh gosh, this story reminded me of Wall-E, The Giver, and many dystopian novels. Absolutely loved it. Glad Al and Scorp got their happy ending!

I REALLY REALLY enjoyed this! It was brilliantly written and entertaining throughout the entire thing. Not a moment of...boring-ness! ;D

You should definitely write more for this pairing! And the AU was really good. Well thought out! D

Well done w

NightRoseK x

It was very sci-fi, which is an interesting take for a Harry Potter fan fic. I liked how you wrote Scorpius, and how the fic began and ended with a character not relevant to the overall plot.

This was a very interesting story. I really liked it though.

I enjoyed it, but found the beginning confusing. It reminded me a bit of Wall-e and a bit of Ray Bradbury or Isaac Asimov. I kept waiting for the boys' parents to show up in the story and was disappointed when they didn't. Oh well.

Amazing. Absolutely amazing- it's like you took Ayn Rand's "Anthem" and Harry Potter and turned it into something a million times more amazing.