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Majestic

So good and very well written!

dude finish this story please no more writer block finish this story dude it is a really awsome story finish it finishitfinishit dont be lame and finish the story really interesting.

Oh woah I saw what happened there LUIGI! That dip

Write more plz!

update you must continue

please write anther chapter please that was so good.

Love it so far and can't wait to read more!

how romantic!

awww, cute...just the perfect type of story to cuddle up with on a cold night! Really enjoyed the part with Daisy dragging poor, bewildered Luigi into the competition, and how he took back his role in the dance. Please update soon, looking forward to seeing how Luigi handles such an agressive, passionate dance as the tango...

like the story and want you to continue.

Dude, this chapter was WELL worth the wait. Don't worry about slow updates. You have a life outside of , really. it's fine.

Oh, and by the way, with the subtle leads, that comes after lots of practice, and it feels like an extremely light tap on your shoulder blade. Sometimes it's just s slight pressure.

Great job! I really like this, I hope you update soon.

I'm actually a dancer! (Sort of. Lol.)

I only noticed a couple things - in the Ballroom dances, you can't see your feet very well (if at all) if you're in the correct position. Look at this video of the Quickstep and you'll see why - www. youtube watch?vMs8nLVfJebk (Remove spaces and skip to 2:20)

Notice from their knees to the middle of their torso - they are pretty much always touching when they are progressing down the floor together, not so much with the kicks and such.

But in the competition, they should NEVER look at their feet. If they do, the rest of their posture follows the neck, and goes down or completely falters. Keep their heads up and high, pay attention to the position of the follow's neck and her posture in particular, since this is from Daisy's POV.

But otherwise you were pretty much on spot! :) Suggestions as to how it feels to dance...well, you were right, you feel weightless at times. I have done Argentine Tango, and it's very precise and intense. www. youtube watch?vrxkp5i8fTCw (Remove spaces again and skip to 1:27.)

Please keep in mind that the flicks, kicks, lifts, etc all have to be VERY precise and sharp. A lot of the leads are done extremely subtly - you can't see some of them. Such as a leg lead or a very subtle arm, shoulder, or even finger lead. Argentine Tango is very structured and you have to keep your form (as with all dances, but most importantly in this one) otherwise you will get lost and you will look like you're just flailing around :)

I hope this helps you somewhat, and I very much enjoyed the way you wrote this, and I hope to see an update VERY soon! I absolutely loved this, and there aren't many dance stories so it makes me very happy! :)

I'm favoriting and subscribing!