I like it.

I haven't read the other stories of this contest but yours is truly entertaining.

Do me a favor and wirte some more!

Wow, I can't believe you didn't win, this was AMAZING! O Awesome job! ]

PS write more Assassin stories! :)

Nice! Love the story very much and it's worth reading ten times over.

What! That was it? OH come on and write a bit more! It took me like two minutes to read that! And I really wanted to see how you would describe the assassination! ARGH. It was good though.

Very nice! I liked it! It reminded me of the trailer played at E3!

I really liked this. I really liked the courtesan thought. She didn't seem to pity herself and that is what courtesan where actually like. They were quite rich too. Could you perhaps continue?