Reviews for Breathless |
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Guest chapter 1 . 4/18/2017 Beautiful! Love your writing style |
Shania002 chapter 1 . 10/26/2016 OMG...are you a writer? It's ...wow i'm gonnna follow you! |
blackkitty95 chapter 1 . 10/22/2016 Your work has once again blown me away. Kudos. |
IcelandicLicorice chapter 1 . 2/7/2016 Dark...I like it. |
please-delete-me-3276423 chapter 1 . 9/16/2015 Ooh, I like! Good job! |
bocchans-booty-shorts chapter 1 . 12/13/2014 I loved that so much... your writing is poetry in itself with no boundaries! (However, the musings taken after what had been written by Robert Frost - I love him too!) The details and descriptions of EVERYTHING were absolutely perfect. Especially in the second, fourth, SIXTH (Ahh, I love Sebaciel) and last musings. Your writing is quite inspiring, I must say! |
DemonsRunWithScissors chapter 1 . 12/7/2014 I am utterly awestruck. Your writing style is absolutely phenomenal! Nice work! XD |
Tiny-Queen chapter 1 . 9/13/2014 I have no words for the amount of feels this gave me xc |
BookAddict67 chapter 1 . 7/26/2014 I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THAT! That was proper, gorgeous writing I tell you! I absolutely adored that and I sincerely hope you take our proposal. Sorry, you have no idea what I'm talking about, but hopefully you will soon (in max. 5 days.) Thanks for that amazing fanfic! |
Annonymous chapter 1 . 4/20/2012 ... I know why you left the end of the poem unfinished for without directly quoting the rest I will say I feel frozen...Frozen by pure awe and emotions I dare not name. Your words invoke both great thought and great pain when understanding the very words you write and knowing I will never understand the inspiring muse, either demure or cruel, that prompted such bittersweet words to arise from your mind...Surely it also captured a bit of your soul and heart; although, I have no right to speak of such when I have no tie within your life. Yet still your words have touched me...In fact, calling them words seems to be a rude slur for what true power you posses within your writing. Truly, you are a master with manipulation; by words or hearts, you twist all to your intended design-if there is an intention in the mode you use to express your means. Now I am spellbound by your work and cast into a deep thrall of both respect and admiration... Humbly, I look toward your next piece of art-no, of life, and eagerly await the time I shall be cast asunder by your power. |
Jen chapter 1 . 12/3/2011 Oh. My. God. This was utterly beautiful. The words you used and they way they are used are just amazing. I'm an artist, and I never understood how writing could be an art.. But now I do. This was absolutely breathtaking, I'm in tears right now. No story on here has ever compelled me to write a review.. but this one did. My god this was just.. oh my god lol. Like.. I don't know how to explain it.. I guess some stories (?) are all about the destination... But this one was also about the journey there. The words twisted and turned and made it so.. smooth? I don't know how to describe it but this was utterly wonderful, my absolute favorite by far 33 |
AlavarMarie chapter 1 . 8/30/2011 I think my favorite part of his was the fact that you put my favorite poem into it. It was a well done story but Fire and Ice is what did it for me. |
marchofthelion chapter 1 . 3/19/2011 I'm in love with your writing style and most of your Kuro fics! x3 |
Sweetcosette chapter 1 . 10/21/2010 I love your writing but im sorry you butchered that poem. its a beautiful poem and you left lines out and mixed up lines and even if you ment it i still think it was butchering. but still your writing is beautiful. |
my name is paper YAH chapter 1 . 6/4/2010 another amazing piece! |