soooo cuuutee 3333 i love ittt *w* they look sooo good together :D

This was great! You can hardly ever find a good Commonershipping fic. Nice!

I love Commonershipping, and I love this fanfic. I admit the characters seem a little...off, but we haven't really got into the heads of these characters in the DP arc, so this is forgivable.

Yay for Dia~

CommonerShipping! That gets an automatic gold star in my book.

I haven't actually made it to the DPPt series yet myself, but I've studied the bios on Serebii. So that's enough for me. I couldn't tell you if they were OOC or not, though.

MOVING ON. The entire thing made me giggle. Dia's clumsiness was cute and I love how Platina acted like it was perfectly okay. The ending was my favourite part, though. ;D

You write a good CommonerShipping. Nice work! No complaints on my end and no mistakes really jump out at me. Keep it up!