What the fuck is this? Instead of torturing Shikamaru for his brother he instead shows him his life story?! Pure and utter crap.

This story was both strange and captivating ;)

I LOVE IT! Will there be a sequel?

Random shitstory

I can't read this shit any more, please just don't write anymore

This was such an interesting piece. It was interesting how it went back and forth to tell the whole story. Harry seemed pretty content when he made the biju, but then he just continued on for centuries not doing anything? Not checking on them? I was confused by that. But I liked the ending with confronting Orochimaru and finding a new solution for Tom's soul.

Confusing metaphorical metaphysical stuff here with fellows having an existential crisis

That was amazing!

Thought this was very interesting. The ties you created between the two worlds was very cool. That said, this was a bit too mysterious and confusing. Now, generally I'm all for not giving the reader all of the information, allowing them to figure things out for themselves. But this was just too convoluted at times. I think being too mysterious definitely takes away from the story.

saying the truth...i dont understand a word of what u r saying...

Well...this was ...different? But! I really enjoyed reading it :)

I recon that shikamaru should have been called shikage - death shadow

Ah! This story was wonderful! Such an interesting premise, though admittedly I had no idea what was going on sometimes, it gave me a sort of dreamy feeling, almost disjointed actually, but that could also be due to the fact that it's midnight and I'm getting sleepy... Anywho! Brilliant job! :) I only wonder what happened to the Elder Wand, but that's hardly that significant, methinks, considering where you left off.

Loved this story

you really ruined this Chapter, that is my opinion either way.
I wont be Reading further.