I’m enjoying the story! I hope you continue it. It was really unexpected for Aizen to show up and claim that he is Shiro’s dad. It is totally bogus but makes me wonder why he wants Ichigo and Shiro so bad? And how did Yuu end up working for Aizen? I hope you’ll reveal more of Aizen, his associates, and his goals soon. I think that would help move the story forward. Even just small glimpses would develop his character in this story as the primary villain. You’ve hinted at it in the pervious chapters but it would be nice to see it develop further now that he has been officially introduced to the main cast of characters (i.e. Shiro).

ohh, the feels!
i have to say,this is a well written chapter to a most adorable story!

I think ichigo's first time wasn't long enough it should have been more intimate and of course detailed

Omgg I love this story I'm so sad to see it was never finished :(

So far I like it. It's just a small grammar error, it's morning not mourning as if mourning for the dead. Just to point that out to you. Anyways keep up the good work :)

Rember that one scene with the music vibrator and on the first song Ichigo was just sitting there thrusting the air cause he couldn't control himself? Yeah I want some more smut like that. Have Hichigo buy another music vibrator or something but PLEASE, I want some vibrator smut! And also I wanna see more Hospitalized Grimmjow cause he's actually kinda sexy heh

I dont know if you have abandoned this story or not but as a writer this is one of the best fanfictions i have read i myself write in fact im working on my own little novel and i know it can be hard to come up with how to fit everyone into a story but like inspiration can come from anywhere i know fall out boy can inspire some good scenes so far i love the story line and the direction its going in the whole paternity test thing left me close to tears well i got a little rambly so i guess all i can say is dont give up please i have read fanfiction where they just cut it of and it was getting good

Is this story done or continuing?

Just started reading this a few days ago and loved it. It's been almost 3 years since you last updated though, hope you get your muse back soon, would love to see it continoued.

Rae

I love u to continue...show aizen how smart quirk really is...

Grimmjow no! wat Grimm!

Dang Grimmjow!

awww poor karin

cool

Aww loved it!