Aw! That was really sweet! I loved it and I'm kinda sad its over now.

*sighs* they were so much fun to watch on TV too...

Anyhu, really great story! I hope you enjoyed it as much as I did! :)

Nice ending! Bhahaha, the joke continues! :)

Awh, I'm glad Daniel and Vala are official now. At least Jacek can do somethings right. ;)

1) He doesn't die.

2) He brought our two favourite lovebirds together! Kind of.

I'm glad Jacek recovered and Vala is able to convince Jacek of a new life, which he seems to taken to pretty well. On the other side, it's nice that both Daniel and Vala broke down their walls to let each other in and be close and intimate. Vala, Daniel and Jacek seem to have a new lease in life and it's a nice fit. :D

Nice wrap up to the storyline! Seems everything worked out for the best for everyone involved, even Mitchell gets an excuse to get the band back together.

And nice bit with the Daniel spit and Vala juice lines. ;)

I Loved this. I'd love to see it continued. The lines:

"Before drifting into sleep, he gave her a proper kiss. Vala smiled. “Daniel spit.”

“Vala juice,” he muttered."

Were the best I've read in a fiction lately.

John Stone

Very well done, particularly the last chapter - thanks for sharing

Wonderful story, and a great ending! Jacek's safe, Daniel and Vala are together, and Cam gets another adventure. Thank you so much for sharing!

.hmm...think I'm in heaven tonight...this and Spacegypsy too...

Very nice...but way too short.

Next time more than 8 chapters 'k?

Thanks

Ah. Perfectly delightful. Lovely D/V love 'scene' it was so sexy without being overstated. So Daniel and Vala. I will look forward to more D/V from you in the future! Great story, well done and totally entertaining. B

From now on, we stay together.

Always.

That's all that needs to be said. More adventures would be fun. They work well together.

Great story, just loving it! b

You have to applaud Daniel for his inginuity for saving Jacek. I think a little of Vala has rubbed off on him. Miracoules to save the least that he was able to get off the slave ship unharmed. Though it is a mystery on who was firing at the other slave ship. Somehow I think it might of been our mysteriouos bald friend in the bar. Anywho, Vala was almost devistated that she may have lost Daniel and her father. I don't think Vala would of had the will to live if that happened. Luckily they're both alive and I think Vala definitely will show Daniel her appreciation. Now if Jacek will stay alive for the duration. :D

Amazing chapter. I think I died when Vala thought Daniel did.

Hahah I'm really loving this man juice thing.

Vala certainly is getting a lot of emotional turmoil in this story of yours. You did a great job of writing her reaction to the thought of losing both Daniel and Jacek.

Nice bit at the end there! The shot of humour worked rather nicely with the tender moment. ;)

You wrote Vala's shock at losing both Jacek and Daniel so well I felt as if my world was ending :) Perhaps my favorite chapter yet.