Salvation :) What a great journey. Thanks for this heartwarming tale. I can see the real Ed and all his fears and insecurities. Simple beautiful. :)

Hope :)

Sad :(

Poor lost soul :(

A very good account of what happened to Our Edward..

Thanks

Evocative and very satisfying story, thank you.

Fascinating start.

you have written a powerful and compelling story of edward's dark and unpleasant past. most authors, when writing about this period of his life, don't linger on the vamperic aspects and gloss over the unappealing nature of his actions. you did not and the story is so much better for it. please continue to write!

I really liked your little story. It slowly ceased to be about Edward and, though most of us aren't murderers, all of us blacken our pure souls which cry out for metanoia. Thanks for posting this story about hope.

Great writing

After reading this, it's a wonder he ever forgave himself enough to be happy with Bella.

Dark, deliciously dark. Much better than my attempt (which is entered in the Dr. Jekyll Mr. Cullen contest). I'm going to stick to happy endings. I seem to have better luck with those ;)

That was a nice ending to your story.

I really enjoyed this :)

It was so descriptive and detailed that I really felt like I was in his mind at times. I look forward to reading more of your work.