Please continue!

This seems so badass, it should be a crime to not update :3! XD seriously, even if it's old, there's no doubt people will read this

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interesting. really wishing for more now *pouts*

You should update this soon, or someone should adopt it. It has a great premise that would be worth expanding on.

This is a nice start.

i really like the start of this story. i just love the idea of ichigo having a different zanpaktou and having better abilities. zangetsu is so boring and having one attack is so pathetic... just as adding speed is all the bankai does. during the arrancar saga this speed is nothing at all which means that the bankai has no effect. anyways i really hope that you will continue this story at some point couse story this promicing just can't go to waste like that...

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awesome start i like that ichigo is much stronger and the fact that he has hidden most of his strength plus not trusting anyone XD i hope this becomes Ichigo/Unohana by the end of the story.

This is an excellent start. I hope you make it an IchiRets (IchigoxRetsu) story, because who else to teach to Ichigo about healing than the 'Goddess of Healing' herself, Retsu Unohana. also you have some grammar mistakes; it's Kenpachi not Kempachi. But other than some grammar mistakes, it's a good start my friend.

Also I will be starting a new Bleach community: Rare Ichigo Pairings. Pairings that consist of Ichigoxany woman, other than Rukia and Orihime. Now don't get me wrong, I have read some good IchiRuki and Ichihime stories, but there are too many off them. There are some good women in Bleach that can be paired with Ichigo to make some very unique situations in stories.

Anyway, I want you join the community, and add this story to it.

Were I a braver man with a better grasp of proper updating scheduels and the cast of Bleach, I would love to take up this story.

As it stands, it's great anyway. The potential and ideas are great, and Ichigo with formal training would be a bit of fun to play with.

My only problem with it? The release phrase. Perhaps, maybe, you could justify it as the phrase is actually in english but he has a horrible japanese accent, but since the progenitor mythos is greek, that wouldn't make much more sense. I would have disreguarded convention and used a greek translation.

I like where your going with this story. It's definetly outside of the norm for bleach. Ichigo with a zanpaktou with healing capabilities and perfect control of his reiatsu make a unique change of character. As for the pairing, I vote for a small harem of 2-3 girls. Retsu, Kukaku, and Yoruichi are the girls I would pick. Ultimately it's up to you, but it would be awesome. I look forward to your next update because this story seems promising.

Good beginning !

Please hurry up with next chapter.

I vote for Ichigo/Retsu, but do as you see fit.

I on the other hand actually think canon Ichigo is far better because of everything that makes him grow. The powers Orihime and Chad gained were already within them, Ichigo didn't give them powers, his reiatsu merely awakened them. Because of this, they never belonged to Ichigo to begin with.