Reviews for Until The Sky Falls Down
WyldClaw chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
why did that girl use stella to take the injured pokemon to the center? What is the pokemon stella's parents gave her?
SkyeGavin chapter 1 . 1/11/2010
This is a warning.

Entries not allowed:

5. Any form of interactive entry: choose your adventure, second person/you based, Q&As, and etc. (OC submission)
The Jaye Benjamin chapter 4 . 12/4/2009
AW. I LOVE YOU REGARDLESS, SAWYER. TO ME YOU'RE A LOVABLE BUBBLR OF JOY. DON'T LISTEN TO THEM OTHER PSYDUCK.
Autumnchronicles chapter 4 . 12/1/2009
Aww, poor Sawyer. That's a mean thing to say. Well, another great chapter, MHG. May the story flow easily from your fingers! X3
Legendary Fairy chapter 4 . 11/30/2009
I really loved this chapter! The suspense is killing me!
Autumnchronicles chapter 3 . 11/25/2009
Hee hee . . . breeds rocks . . . great job! I like her new Pokemon lots! Keep writing, please!
The Jaye Benjamin chapter 3 . 11/23/2009
Aw, Sawyer's so cute.
Autumnchronicles chapter 2 . 11/19/2009
Love it! :3 I like Minnie a lot. I hope you evolve her in the future! I love Ledian even more. It's one of my favorite bug types.
Startix-Master of the NoLess chapter 2 . 11/19/2009
Mou, parting is such sweet sorrow...great chapter again and Minnie for a Ledyba? That's a new one o.0 Hope you can update sooner next time~!
Startix-Master of the NoLess chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
First off, WOW...one chapter but it's making me crave SO much more~! And nice cliffhanger; I'm dying to see what Stella's Pokemon is~

My OC (use if you want, I zetta hope that you do~)

Name: Varacei "Urya" Alger (prefers Urya)

Age: 11

Height: 4 ft. tall

Gender: Male

Occupation: Trainer

Goals: See the world and challenge the League

Likes: Lava Cookies, any form of meat, Lemonade, his friends and Pokemon

Dislikes: Fish, people who mistreat their Pokemon, Contests

Personality: A little emo when meeting new people, but towards his friends, he's a jokester and unquestionably loyal. Treasures his Pokemon as his lifelong family and has every single one registered to a Cherish Ball.

Hair: Black and flowing (like a girl's, which he likes) with six white stripes going down it (two on the left, two on the right and two down the middle)

Eyes: His left is green and the right is yellow.

Wear: A long-sleeved black shirt and blue jeans. In his right ear is an earring of the Rainbow Wing and he wears black sandals with silver straps. His backpack is custom-made, able to hold large amounts of items with no fear of overstuffing. Around his neck is a small pendant of a Ho-Oh with his nickname 'Urya' engraved on the back.

Pokemon:

Shiny Beldum-Shiny Metagross (Ragnarok, male): His most precious Pokemon and the first one he ever got, the two share a bond like no other (celebrating a victory together, getting into arguments, etc.). Varacei keeps him out of his Cherish Ball.

Shiny Porygon-Shiny PorygonZ (Jackson, male): A very strange Pokemon but one that Varacei loves nonetheless. Has a habit of getting carried away in battle.

Chimchar-Infernape (Firebrawl, male): Mischievous and LOVES getting into trouble. Shares Urya's love of Lava Cookies, which leads to numerous playful fights between the two.

Later, can you have him obtain a female shiny Bagon (Kannako), a female Squirtle (Mazu) and a Rotom (Topaz), please~? (NOT godmodding, Gary Tsuing or posing; I'm just using my Platinum team)~thanks in advance and hope you update really soon, this story has potential~;3
sunshine5991 chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
here you go, this is my OC, please send me an email letting me know wether or not your going to use her, and if you do feel free to change any details, i dont really mind, but if you do change her name just let me know what its been changed to

Name: Paige Harris

Age: 14

Gender: female

Appearence: dark brown hair, almost always down and straight, she wears a pair of extremely light blue ripped skinny jeans which are nearly white, a light blue baggy top which hangs off one shoulder and has a silver design on the front, a white vest top underneath the blue top, a pair of white high heeled boots, and a white belt holding her six pokeballs

Personality: is generally kind but is very short tempered

Trainer type: trainer

Pokemon: as she hade spent so long working and training all her pokemon are very strong, although her blazikin and delcatty are strongwer than the rest. she does not plan on catching anymore as she is very close to all her pokemon (they were her only friends for a long time) and she doesnt want to send any away

feel free to change any of the moves (I left out common ones like tackle and quick attack) and i know that there is more than four but i know its very hard to write about a battle if you only have four moves.

blaziken - starter - Flare blitz, sky uppercut, brave bird, blaze kick, fire punch, hyper beam, overheat, earthquake

delcatty - 1st caught - water pulse, blissard, solar beam, iron tail, thunder, assist, zen headbut, shadow ball

golduck - 2nd caught - hydro pump, water pulse, confusion, fury swipes, ice beam, psychic, focus punch, hyper beam

dewgong - 3rd caught -blizzard, ice shard, aurora beam, aqua ring, aqua tail, ice beam, protect, avalanche

Gardevoir - 4th caught - confusion, teleport, magical leaf, future sight, psychic, energy ball, sunny day, solar beam

rapidash - 5th caught - mega horn, fire spin, take down, flare blits, fire blast, overheat, poison jab, solar beam

(Remember you can change any of these if you wish, i dont really care)

Hometown and Region: Fortree city, Hoenn

History: her mother and father were both top co-ordinators and pressured her to become a co-ordinator, she never wanted to be a co-ordinator as her true passion was battling, her parents refused to let her be a battler so she ran away and never went back, nor does she plan on anytime soon

Acomplishments: when she left she had no money of her own so although she had her starter she couldnt travel, she got a job in slateport and worked for a few years, during this time she caught pokemon and trained. when she was thirteen she finally travelled Hoenn and got to the final where she lost while both trainers were on their last pokemon and both pokemon were ready to collapse, but hers did first

Goals: to become part of the elite

Other: ever since she ran away she hasnt spoken to her parents and doesnt plan on doing so any time soon, the only reason she went back to Fortree was for a badge
Autumnchronicles chapter 1 . 11/12/2009
This is really good so far. I like the vague style. It's refreshing. Hope you keep writing it for a long time!
Legendary Fairy chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Nice! Here are my OC!

Here are my OC! Also nice fiction!

Name: Alessandra Cesarini

Nickname: Alex

Eyes: Brown

Hair: Waist-long brown hair always down and bangs old back from a blue headband

Clothes:

Daily: Blue t-shirt, black skirt and black running shorts. Has also a white scarf.

Contest: Ties her hair with a blue ribbon, a white sleeveless-simple dress and blue boots

Personality: She's friendly and outgoing. If someone angers her better run away.

Bio: Alex and Markus, her childhood friend and secret crush, born and lived for ten years in Jotho and they're both have breeders as parents.

Starter Pokemon: Aipom(Hannah), female. Chikorita is Alex's starter Pokémon. She's like her Master. Hates to remain in her Poké Ball. Has two ribbons tied around her ears

Pokemon (eventually or have now):

Current Pokémon:

Eevee(Light), female. Has a pink collar around her neck. Dislikes staying in her Poké Ball.

Eevee (Dark), male. Has a blue collar around his neck. Dislikes stayin in his Poké Ball.

Wants to capture:

A female Pidgey that she'll call Windy.

A male Pichu that she'll call Thunder.

A male Vulpix that she'll call Blaze.

Future Pokémon:

Hannah the Ambipom

Light the Espeon

Dark the Umbreon

Windy the Pidgeot

Thunder the Pikachu

Blaze the Ninetales

Name: Markus Pearl

Eyes: Blue

Hair: Wild blonde hair

Clothes:

Daily: black t-shirt, red running shoes and black running shorts. Has also a blue scarf.

Personality: He's a little impatient but he waits for his friend, Alex.

Bio: Markus and Alex, his childhood friend and secret crush, born and lived for ten years in Jotho and they're both have breeders as parents. The two left they're home to start their journey to Kanto.

Starter Pokemon: Cyndaquil(Flame), female. Cyndaquil is Markus's starter Pokémon. She's like her Master. Hates to remain in her Poké Ball.

Pokemon (eventually or have now):

Current Pokémon:

Eevee(Snow), male. Has a blue collar around his neck with a blue gem from Sinnoh. Dislikes staying in his Poké Ball.

Eevee (Leaf), female. Has a green collar around his neck a green gem from Sinnoh. Dislikes stayin in her Poké Ball.

Wants to capture:

A male Spearow that he'll call Spirit.

A male Elekid that he'll call Sparky.

A male Growlithe that he'll call Rex.

Future Pokémon:

Flame the Typhlosion

Snow the Glaceon

Leaf the Leafeon

Spirit the Fearow

Sparky the Electabuzz

Rex the Arcanine
MaelstromBanes chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Wow, that depressing 13th B-day

And a random girl pick Stella to help her save a pokemon?

I wonder whats Stella's starter pokemon?