Reviews for Temptation
Cafrye chapter 1 . 3/20/2019
I was not raised Catholic but Baptist and there is one thing I have to say about God and sex. If you believe in God, God created sex. He literally told Adam and Eve to go forth and multiply. The book, Song of Solomon, is all about sex. So, yeah, the sex in church doesn't bother me so much.

I sort of get Sasuke but I also understand Naruto.
Kyuubi-dono chapter 1 . 6/12/2016
Nice bit of phsychiological bull shat at the end there. I enjoyed this.
Ashinia chapter 1 . 5/10/2016
So true...I am Apostolic but I do attend a Catholic school and let me just say that I completely understand where your Sasuke is coming from, especially the part about God loving you unconditionally as long as you abide to their conditions and I am quite sure that if it wasn't for my mother's monthly "Everyone is a sinner." Speech, I might have also been just like some of the schools highly homophobic teachers and students.
purvy sage chapter 1 . 10/4/2012
Nice story! Great visualization... I could really "see" the vast, dark, abandoned church sanctuary... the lighting... the echoing sounds... Romantic in the extreme!
Nixo chapter 1 . 8/28/2012
It's so nice

Gambatte yo! *hugsss*
QuilB9 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
common occurrence. common it would be the priest pounding away... hahahaha...

im sorry... but seriously it's not a joke... (whisper: let the catholic priest's marry, i mean that's the central problem why they molest little choir boys)
ShadowHeHaHo-deleted chapter 1 . 8/31/2011
I wonder if Sasuke would believe in God if he lost Naruto? I know what he's talking about though, I don't believe in God either (though my mom wishes I did) and my reasoning is that people believe in God because they need him. And I don't feel I need him. So, yeah.
Mannequin Republic chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
I loved et.

So like, I'm Christian and I try to follow the bible as much as possible. Although, yeah. I kinda fall through in lots of ways. With my copious amounts of swearing and my love for all this yaoi. (Mm, yaoi)

CHRISTIAN'S BELIEF Y'ALL. IF YA DUN LIKE, SHUN IT. K~?

But yet, me and my family believe (well at least, me and my brother) in predestination, as in. God predestined everything. (Calvinism) God predestined those who "will be saved" and there is literally no, free-will. Some people don't like this idea of, "God choosing people and not having their own free-will to be the ones who chose them" since they want their own choices. It's just that, God still loves everybody. He just chooses who He wants.

Personally, I think the whole thing is very interesting and just listening to some podcasts of Calvinist's ways is just really.. interesting in the way they think.

ANYWAY. That's not the point! I'm not trying to go about my faith and everything, because I'm not that sort of person (because I chose yaoi and everything. I don't understand how that's predestined since I don't think God would've wanted me to like yaoi. ~_~) But yes, God still loves everyone unconditionally, no matter what they do. Although, He's still a just God. So if they murder, that's still bad 'n everythang.

Man, -phew-

BTW I died from that lemon. *_* Y U KILL ME SO MUCH NOWDAY, HUH? LAH~! I BE DED SOY MUCHAH.

MOTHA FUCHKA. (- whoops/?xD Some times it just spills, I CAN' HALP IT'AA..)
cullensporks chapter 1 . 6/7/2011
...I liked the sex...alot...I feel dirtyXD awesome job, I loved it:)
counter-intuitive chapter 1 . 5/29/2011
I'm an atheist and I loved the fic :)
Lucain chapter 1 . 8/23/2010
Sasuke's type of thinking sort of reminds me of Boccaccio. One quote of his that I've always remembered is “Heaven would indeed be heaven if lovers were there permitted as much enjoyment as they had experienced on earth”. I know that's not exactly what Sasuke was saying but Boccaccio always seemed to value love above religion.

This story was wonderfully written and although I can't say that I completely understand Naruto or Sasuke, it was immpoible not to find them both interesting. There's not to many fics out there that dabble in religion. I guess it's a sensitive topic? Thanks for having the balls to write the ultimate sex in a church. I couldn't help but picture it inside my old parish, I'll never be able to look at the altar the same way again xD
xShiroi-chan chapter 1 . 6/24/2010
:O. It's 3 AM in the morning now, so don't expect something that is deep and makes sense. (Argh, I'm getting a migraine, so forgive me if I end up sputtering rubbish) But I want to review this story so much~ ;)

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"A God of unconditional love... as long as you follow all their conditions." Hm? (Oh the IRONY!~) Truthfully, I don't believe in that. Heck, I don't even believe in God, but (I do have a bible, ironic isn't it?)

This fic, totally expresses what I've had in mind for so. Goddamn. LONG! Because I've always thought that the loopholes and hypocrisies of Christianity are... illogical to say the least.

Because didn't God say that we should not judge others? (Well, from what I can remember from the things my caretaker, who is a Christian, told me) In my point of view, I think that what His believers disagree with, does not exactly equate to what He disagree, because they are not Him, and He is a God, someone that us humans can never understand, no matter how much we want to, that is a fact. I believe that His believers are really the ones who are actually going against His rules (no offence anyone) by actually rejecting those who are actually different in a way they deem "unnatural". (And Sasuke is the very epitome of that in this story I believe. *chuckles*)

I believe that God loves everyone unconditionally (Which brings me back to the sentence above, like I've said, illogical and contradicting), even if they are not His followers, because he created us, every single one of us, (that makes us all his children doesn't it?) and that even if they go against the "norm" that people (we, HUMANS and not God) set. So why can't they understand that? (Once again, no offence meant :S)

Now that I think about it... they shun everything that they don't understand... Just because THEY don't, doesn't mean that others don't. They think that they are the rulebook, which is absolutely not the case. Because the World circles around one point, and that point was not, is not and will NEVER be them. People will always have their own thoughts, to be unique, because we were created (and by God no less, how ironic) to be this way.

But hey, despite all this, there are believers out there who do understand! That makes me happy :P (My friend, for example :P)

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Did that make sense? Because to me and my sleep-deprived brain, no it didn't. I think I rambled too much on the same point... Hope you didn't find me too annoying! Well anyway, about the fic!

I love your Sasuke. (Ehh, no wait! I always love Sasuke! *Except the insane one in the manga :S*) I love the way how you characterized your Sasuke, because that's the way I've always imagined him to be. (If Naruto was set in a AU verse of course.) I do feel sad for your Naru-chan though, the guilt totally ate at him throughout the smex, but he felt sorry in the end did he not? (God is forgiving, is He not?)

Sasuke... Sasuke... I'm so tired to look into it... Argh, wish I could've given a better review but I won't have the time to do so tomorrow and by Saturday I would've forgotten...

BUT! I do know one thing.

That lemon was HAWT (to the extreme!~) *nosebleeds*

And I know another thing...

I REALLY need sleep soon... Zzzzz...

Shiroi(:

(Once again, I apologise if I have offended anyone ... *bows sleepily*)
Nefarious61 chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
Fucking amazing and so, so unexpectedly sweet. Sinful and ruthless and beautiful. Incredibly wrong, but that's exactly what makes it so GOOD. Yay for Sasuke's dirty mouth. What a tempting devil. Sasuke holding his hand at the end... That kinda made me melt a little. Also, I think Naruto is slightly masochistic and suffering from stockholm syndrome, not that it matters at all. Anyway, love this.

xoxo Nefarious
bridmatt chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
Very, very interesting story. Certainly it exposes the hypocrisies of organized religion. But at the same time, there was a certain feeling of emptiness to Sasuke's words and actions, that rather than having something to look forward to, all he wanted was what he had with Naruto. It's romantic, but it lacks a certain amount of hope, and I don't mean in the religious sense, but hope for the future, that their love could grow, that they could have more than just clandestine sex in darkened rooms. The here and now is good, but it isn't everything, and sadly, one person, no matter how wonderful, can't be everything for another person either. It's too much to ask of Naruto, too great a burden for him. What will Sasuke do when Naruto inevitably disappoints him? Still, they've been close since they were 6 and Sasuke is just a confused, angry teenager right now. I think they'll continue to be with one another and love one another no matter what comes after this, and hopefully Sasuke will lose some of his cynicism. So that was my take on it. :P Hot story overall, and good grief the accompanying fan art!
Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Nice story!
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