This story is so nicely written and lovely. You portray them both very well. I wish there was even more! Awesome story and chapter.

I loved this chapter! Those last 3 paragraphs are perfect. And Ryohei's call was hilarious and great. I also really loved the cat naps on Dino's bed. Overall, really awesome fic that I wish would never end ;_;

Awesome chapter! I loved their conversation. Your Hibari is so nicely written, I loved the gentleness underneath the usual coldness. Great story so far :) And when he put Hibird in Dino's hair, that was so adorable.

This story is great! i totally love it! Not love at the first sight or Dino being disturbing & express his love too much... Just a long-term developing relationship!

I liked the slow pace of this story. It felt warm and cute all through out the story. Even though Hibari was slightly OOC, you wrote his role very well. And you had Dino very IC, and also wrote his role well. You left the story at a good spot, although the "In-Progress" makes one think you might continue the story again. Which would be nice to see. I like your writing style.

i love this story and how you describe Dino's and Hibari's relationship! please write more!

...*sigh*

It's... beautiful. Simply,wonderfully, artistically beautiful.

The wording, the characters, the plot, every action of theirs 'cause me to smile. I love this story.

I might be a bit of a leecher for asking this, but will there be a continuation? A scene with the raid against the enemy family, and perhaps more?

I know you guys haven't continued fanfics in a very long time but I was just wondering if there'll ever be a day when this story and others will be continued.

But if it isn't going to be, thanks for writing this anyways. It was a chef-d'oeuvre within the D18 fics posted on FF and not LJ (though I know you guys posted this on LJ too)

Anyways, thanks for writing this wonderful story.

cool

no continuation?

hehe kidding

Yeah finished chap3 le~

Once again, they're so in character

And it's so sweet and beautiful!~~~~ x3

Take care and update soon! CHEERS/

Omg it's super nice story! So in character aren't they P

And smooth plot and nice writing style Just hope it's not tradegic considering it is labelled under hurt/comfort. Hmm.

Anyways i haven't read the next chapter (it's late over here)... But please continue this fic :D

yay finally have the time to read this :D oh i love this chapter! so sweet... and their 1st kiss :

Oh my goodness.

That was once again, beautiful.

I can't believe Kyoya smiled, just once for Dino! XDD

Good for you Dino! You finally got his kiss. D

Ohgad D18

sho adorable.

IC-ness FTW.

Writing style is luvv~ just be careful of run-on sentences ;3

Otherwise, I ADORED IT! Vivid descriptions mm~ And the awkwardness between Dino and Hiba in the bedroom...wait, that sounds wrong. LOL Ohwuteverr, the awkwardness is basically smexual tension.

:3

Ohyeshh, the sakura viewing season~ I like that 'secret' garden 3

Kiss~ aww

Hibari makes the move. And Dino is just himself.

Luv 3

How sweet! And clearly, Hibari doesn't get the counter-logic that is biting someone to death when they've already died...

I've seen your fic on LJ before, and I adore it. This one is no exception. I love the interaction between Dino and Hibari, and I love that you've managed to keep them IC. I loved the idea of Dino bringing Hibari breakfast, and the scene near the sakura was sweet.

I'm looking forward to reading more of this fic!