WHAT.

Can i assume that the name Varis was inspired by the Varys,Master of Whisperers in Game of Thrones?

This was masterfully written. Its safe say that you are one of my favourite writers.

I really enjoyed this! The plot twist actually made a lot of sense!

I was hoping for a bit more Ed and Lu bonding, as it seemed there would be. But this was still very cute

Awesome. Always.

Wow...I did not expect Lucy to be the Black Spider. I know now why you said AU haha. This is a really different fic to what I read normally, which I liked. Thank you for writing this fic :)

it's interesting

Awesome twist. Loved it all.

i enjoyed this SO much :D I like how you were contrary to fanon and I think its very interesting to have Lucy as the real spy master- well done!

I adored this, and anyone who didn't realize that Lucy was the actual spymaster needs to read more. Thank you for writing this, it was hilarious and brilliant

Well it is OOC, but well-written. I disliked when I thought Ed was the Black Spider, for I always had a vision of him leading intelligence with more justice and less cruel viciousness

I actually think it was kinda predictable.

I loved this! :D
Will you write any more of the Black Spider?

Wow! I did not see that coming.

I just love how you put on an elaborate display on having us believe that Edmund is the 'Black Spider' or the spymaster and Narnia's Intelligence, but it was actually Lucy!

My, I did not see that coming at all.

Oh, and poor Edmund. Lucy had him running around all over those dark grounds but it sure did help in giving Varis the scary, unnerved vibes.

Yay to Edmund for notcing Varis and apprehending him! After all, Lucy's plan wouldn't have worked if he didn't catch the man trailing after him. :)

Another amazing work!