This is the best Bellice fic hands down.

So sweet and to the point. And the "second date" stuff is just killer.

I love the "undying declarations of love were only expressed after the second date." hahaha that really made me laugh for some reason

sweet. thank you for sharing. i liked it.

Cool!

Very, very cute. A pleasant read I must say. I enjoyed it immensely.

Wow again :)

You have such a wonderfully descriptive way of writing. I loved the ending: It was only a first date.

You are an excellent writer, Bern.

Great little One-Shot!

~Labbit :)

This is so cute and nice, I totally think it should've been bigger. So maybe you can consider it? :)

Anyway, lovely reading, thanks for sharing!

Wow cool.

this was so cute. hardly ever do i like alice/bella when they are both vampires. but this?

sheer wonderfulness.

Loved it, can't wait to see what else is to come.

Aw, I loved it! Adorable. Everything was seriously adorable from Alice's strange logic to Bella's explanation of how they would progress. And of course, this line:

"But even if she had retained the ability to express it, she wasn't allowed to, because undying declarations of love were only permitted after the second date."

I wanted to hug them lol. And hey, this was almost 1,0 words! You're closer to your novel yet :P

Jocelyn

LOL I guess undying declerations of love have to wait for the second date when you already live together and therefor have no need for a U-haul.

Very cute, thank you for sharing.

I love Bella and Alice together, they are so perfect for each other.

Great job !