So...where's the update? (Lol) it was good and yeah...idk I want to read more! Please tell me you have something planned.

beautiful , but where's the rest?

OH MY! That was great! I can't believe they've been so close for so long and hadn't found each other until they decided to quit waiting for each other.

~Susan

Wow, this is amazing. Your words are so perfectly placed, I can feel their anguish. Thanks so much for taking the time to write this!

I love this story. Edward and Bella's pain is portrayed beautifully. Please update soon :)

Christmas present maybe?

Thank heavens you're doing more to this. Loved it. I loved the bounce back and forth between their two lives. They are living so closely in so many different ways - not just in proximity but in the way they live - almost parallel to each other. I love the concept of fate that is wrapped into this. Can't wait for more!

Great story can't wait for the next update :)

I finally had a chance to read this story and I have to tell you it blew me away. This is really beautifuly written, the alternating POV's dancing in harmony. I really look forward to the next chapters.

I really like all the parallels they have going on. I can't wait to read the remaining chapter once they are posted. Thanks for sharing!

Okay. Interesting story. Now i can't wait for the next chap.

Crap bb, I'm sorry I didn't review this sooner. BAD beta.. NEEDS a SPANKING. *smirk*

Anywho.. love the new story and am SO enjoying getting to know you and beta'ing for you. Big hugs and kisses and can't wait for the next chapter!

Glad to see your mojo back. Cannot wait til the two other chapters of this it was so beautiful. Truly a heartfelt fic...

Oh chipmunk... This story is going to be great. I cant wait for the next chapters. I love how they were feeling the same things at the same time. I also loved the way he just knew she was there. and the feeling that she had when he was near. It was powerful. I think your mojo is back. Your no longer in a funk. I wish I could find my muse so easily.

Neman

Enjoyed it. Looking forward to more.

So sweet. Very engaging plot.

I'm looking forward to see the rest of it!