Excellent! I loved this!

This was great story, the ending little "twist" was terrific.

Greast fic! Just goes to show - sometimes you have to slip into Drama Queen mode to really get John Gage's attention

Great read!

Again, what a great story! I like the way you've included Cap in as a third part of the team we know as Johnny and Roy and made him a buffer for Johnny's often hardheadedness. Great job!

ooooohhhhhh. Roy was in on it also?, I wonder what Johnny would do if he ever found out about it!. probably transfer or quit on em!.

Very nicely done!

Super well done! The threat of splitting them up was the perfect attitude adjustment mechanism. Loved how it turned out to be Roy's idea!

KEL

yup! He really is good, isn't he?

;-)

I must of had a busy week to some how miss this story! Yep! Cap is good at his job and so is your writing, in fact both are actually great!

Loved how Roy was involved!

Hope you have more stories in the works!

Excellent! I hope you have more Johnny stories!

What a great ending! I would never have suspected Roy... Very well written.

Well done! I had no idea how that was going to turn out. Thanks for keeping me guessing until it was resolved. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Good story I liked what you did with it keep up the good writing

That was great. I really liked how Cap filed the report after figure out to talk to his youngest crew member. The way John was in the show meshes very well with how you have him in your story, he always seemed to talk risks and was happy to do so. I really enjoyed this, thanks for sharing it.