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i thought they were going to keep the dog

they are not even going to try

Meh, it suits both characters. Shame Ron is always such a forgiving punching bag lol

Where else could such a saying come from?

Very good ending. It still managed to surprise me yet is perfectly logical. Sweet conclusion.

There is no more dangerous leap than a jump to conclusions.

Strong opening. Got me tense to see how you wrap things up, which means you've done your job.

Good story, straight to the point. I like the ending, but they still need a long talk. Ron needs to growup a little and Kim needs to become more of a child.

Good job,

Larry (Sentinel 103)

So we're going to have a double funeral? Yep KP does jump to conslusions part of her Kimness I believe.

Larry (Sentinel 103)

And they will keep on dancing with only a few more missteps along the way.

Colorado Ice Rescue? Wouldn't that be Search and Rescue? They train for all types of rescue you know.

"You always put your own safety above others" I think you meant You always put others above your own safety.

Good job even with the small mistakes. It didn't distract from the enjoyment of the tale.

Nice ending chapter,

-You always put your own safety above others.-

Are you sure this sentence is okay?

Good luck with the continuation of the Bionikim saga.

keep up the good writing,

reader101w

Thanks for the quick read, it was enjoyable.

Glad it worked out, but one thing does bother me.

What would be the difference for Kim and Ron of being married or living together?

Both are a pretty big step and similar of sharing the same home/apartment etc. and being around each other. Learning to live with the others mannerism and habits.

Again great read, thanks and good luck with the Fannies.

Great beginning for an exciting story.

Kim looked a little bit of a jerk, but it was needed for the setup of being on the ice.

Going on to the next chapter, can't wait to see what happens.

Thanks

Great ending to a great story whitem. very touching

Great work, whitem. I loved the ending so much. :) Great work. Great, great work. Keep up the fine job!

Good ending to the story.

I've always loved the idea of chipping your pet. If I ever have the cash, both of our cats are getting one put in. Hmm, maybe get myself done at the same time?