Reviews for Alice, The outcast |
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Princess Peridot chapter 11 . 3/23/2014 Di Immortalis! You haven't updated this in a little over 3 YEARS. I really want to see what happens next. |
Eagleblade chapter 4 . 11/5/2013 I think she's a bit of a Mary Sue . . . okay, a lot of a Mary Sue. |
Ranger132 chapter 2 . 9/3/2012 Apollo? NO just no. |
Princesslori chapter 11 . 8/27/2011 Cool xxx |
nicodiangelorocks chapter 4 . 4/3/2011 I LUV IT:DDDDDDDDDD |
nicodiangelorocks chapter 2 . 4/3/2011 Hahaha Percy is still his stupid self! I LUV IT THOUGH! i luv ur story so fall! ROCK ON GURLY (i think srry if ur a guy) XD |
Cyber Girl chapter 11 . 3/8/2011 Thank you so much for making annabeth evil! I really hate her. This story is really good I hope that you'll continue making more chapters. I'm your biggest fan! You rock! |
AcademicGames chapter 11 . 11/29/2010 The entire time you mentioned luke i couldn't help imagane some crazy fan girl there. The fan girl was me screaming “LUKE I LOVE YOU. TEAM LUKE. LUKE LUKE HE'S ARE MAN IF HE CAN'T DO IT NO ONE CAN!” I was also wearing a team luke shirt! oh i know i sound kinda pushie but i think luke should fall for hebe goddess of youth. then dedicate her to ME! If you want my idea just pm me and i'll give you the info. UPDATE SOON! |
mia chapter 11 . 11/29/2010 i like the idea of apollo and alice. because apollo is my favourite god.i cant wait for the next cheapter and before i forget your story is fantastic |
elena chapter 11 . 11/29/2010 nice |
little chapter 10 . 9/21/2010 i like your story and i like the idea of apollo and alice. because apollo is my favourite god.i cant wait for the next cheapter and before i forget your story is fantastic. |
ohlivtree chapter 9 . 8/2/2010 I would never expect Annabeth to be the villain of a story. |
AveryKnight chapter 9 . 7/29/2010 Niiiice! |
girlloves2write chapter 9 . 7/29/2010 wow this was a weird story i'm usually in love ewith weird stories but not this one it's not bad or any hting it's just the plot seems a little crazy but you can save it you're a good writer |
notebookthief chapter 9 . 7/27/2010 Please update! |