Ok first Abby and McGee’s twins would be 3-4 1/2 years old as Abby got pregnant right before the tied the knot.

Just out of a coma and head slapped, don't think so

What the fuck everyone is way out of character and gibbs should of gone w8th tony not stupid ziva gibbs actually loves tony like a son ziva doesn't even like tony and since when di paramedics know whats really wrong with someone how can they tell someone is in a coma wuth out scans or tests and to take him straight to icu with out doing xrays scans and all other check ups this is sooooo wrong and fucked uo i cant even carry on reading grr

Wow... After all that NCIS should just become a dating service... ._.

My names caitlin to' but its spelled kaitlyn

How is it that you have Abby pregnant before Ziva, but Ziva has the older child...?

aww thats a really propa sweet story, love it, love the story line and the Mcabby/Tiva/jibbs. lol

aww. i wanna cry afta chapta 2

McGee and Abby's Kids would be 5 years old considering this was five years from the wedding and that after Abby was pregnant.

Great story, I enjoyed it all the way. The ending was wonderful.

Great story!

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!

aw, those kids sound like cutie pies! :D love the ending, love the story overall! great job! I hope you continue writing wonderful stories like this!

luve it

I'm not that good when it comes to being helpful, but...

Do the weddings and make some of the girls pregnant and try and carry out a story with their pregnancy (if you want to).

For the five years, one of the pairings should have twins and/or triplets.

I hope I've been at least somewhat helpful.

Can't wait for the rest!

great story! i think gibbs was really sweet in the end saying she would be his fifth and final wife.. can't wait for more! :D