Can you please keep writing the story because I love it!

i love this story and would love to see what happens next. i really hope you update it soon.

Dawnie now gets an over protecive big brother? Is that better or worse than an over protective older sister? ;)

More please! Can't wait for more chapters.

i like it, can you please continue.

Interesting take on the Dawn of s5 gig. I can totally see them sending her with Riley to another place just to be safe. I knew Gibbs was gonna wanna dig deeper. Can't wait to see more.

Great story! Hope to see more soon!

SARAH

Great start

I really like this story and this chapter. Please update soon.

huh? when did Buffy enter the story?

*poke* More!

So, what? She was with the cult or already dead in this universe when they went through? I keep expecting Dawn to end up using magic anyway because Willow and them didn't really understand what she was. After all, if she is the "key" to all of the dimensional walls, why would she be diminished going to any reality?

That was a really great chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter to hear what Riley says about Buffy. Great job!

This Story looks good. Can't wait to see more chapters! I like how you put Dawn and Riley as sibling in the alternate universe you don't see enough of them. Oh could you bring alternate universe Tara into this as say McGee's half sister but with her memories of the universe that Dawn and Riley lived in please. Love it! Can't wait to see next update.

Sounds promising :)