Hey are you dead, because you haven't posted anything in 6 years.

Gotta say. for being from a different country. the english and grammar is better than most Americans i know can do XD

Safeguard is a move that prevents non-volatile status effects when active. Clearly, you don't seem to understand that.

lmao the Pikachi pickup lines were hilarious

That match was supposed to be a 1v1 but you made it a 3v3. You really gotta double check your writing, or at least get a beta.

holy shit paul

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FRIED PIDGEY LOL

Is this the gible Ash caught or a different one

I loved the plot twists... You are an amazing writer!

I like the story. Really I liked it very much, but didn't really see the Ash-Harem. Although many girls flirted with him, it was like he had a battle for who to choose in the end or if he was going to end with all of the girls that where supposed to be in the Harem. That's my only "Flame" on this story, because apart from that the story was great and liked how you even changed something like Garchomp wanting to roam free instead of staying with Ash and Ash having a Lucario.

That was an awesome final battle! Epilogue was really sweet too. Nice to see history repeating itself with the manga/game characters. Hope Red can keep the title in the family XD. Great story (aside from my cloak rant haha, at least he stopped wearing it eventually, and Sarah became less devious once the others found out about Ash).

I'm liking this story but I just gotta say some thing that annoys me... I can understand Ash being reluctant to show himself to his friends again and he uses the cloak to hide himself but... Why the hell did it have to be a cloak? How many people would you see wondering around wearing cloaks in a modern setting? If Ash wanted to blend in and hide himself at the same time then maybe he should have worn a hoodie with a large hood instead? That's a lot more easy to blend into a crowd with and would still hide his face. The image of Ash wearing a cloak is just hard to believe... And yet he still gets girls to think hes cute despite wearing a stupid cloak in broad daylight in something that belongs at a medieval fair. Not exactly fashionable... Also Sarah is the definition of problem child ain't she? She fooled us all with her cute girl act back in Pallet Town

brilliant!~~~

'Ash lost a Pokémon, why did he do that!?' Because that's how battles work, he didn't tell any of his Pokémon to lose (bar torkoal) you dumb whore Sarah.