Cant wait for more

Oh come on you can't stop now!

bravo pour ton histoire elle est magnifique ; il faudra nous donner la suite le plus vite ( selon ta disponibilité et de ton temps)
Cela fait la 3ème histoire que je découvre que Brian est un enfant dont Jack Kinney n'est pas le père.
Bravo et continus à nous faire rever.
J' attend la suite avec impatience.

just thought you should know that story had a stupid ending... there should have been so much more to that story... that just really started to take off :-( I can't say it enough if you're going to write a story like that you shouldn't start it if you're not going to finish it

Not to short just enough to getvud where we need to be.

Awww

Oh I love sweet brian ! Glad he is giving ray a chance. Loved it as usual. Dkrru about the tooth

OK you managed to make me feel bad for all of them lol. Clive and Justin for being confused by brian . Brian and ray for the positions they are in. Loved it

Good chapter happy new yr

Did not see that coming! How ever not surprised either. Brian is still hurt over losing ray and the fact that he didn't come back after Brian grew up. I get it. Have the feeling my son will feel the same about his dad that gave up rights to him. If don't talk before then have a great holiday.

Oh no! I feel so bad for both Brian and Ray, I hope that they are able to work things out and foster a healthy relationship. It really seems like they have both been craving a loving father/son relationship for both of their respective lives, and it would be a shame to see them fall apart. This is my favorite fic of yours, I just find Justin to be so sweet in this. Thank you for updating and sorry life's been a bitch!

-Ramenmustachio xxx

Ah ha...so stubbornness is inherited :). But I'm like Brian's dad and I hope that. Brian can learn to forgive his dad and himself. And that he can learn to love

Oh you gave the man in the wheelchair his on Justin and just like Brian and he got him! They are so much alike! Yet I don't blame Brian for needing air a lot has been thrown at him in a short time. Love it!,

It looks like a father/son talk is in the works. I can't wait for the next update. Really enjoying all your stories!

I think you like making me cry! This time u don't know who I feel sorrier for! At least now Brian knows he was loved growing up and still is. I can relate to ray since I am in a chair but I raised mine. He was just scared something would happen to Brian and wouldn't risk it.