woaww, kaweii

Epic! How were the monks punished?

oh my god this is PERFECT OH MY GOD ASADiuskljdfsi

HELP

Aaaawwww that is so gay ! I'm gay! (Happy)

Cute ending, I love reading Chase getting all possessive. It fits very well with the iconic characteristics of dragons. Greedy, selfish borders indeed. Though they have good reason to be. Anyway, I admit I have a question that perhaps was already answered but I missed somehow. In Jack's Grandfather's journal, what was the end of the sentence he was writing when Jack interrupted him? What was he worried about? Jack accessing his magic or something else entirely? I'm ungodly curious. But feel free to tell me to stuff it if I'm prying.

Again, great story, very interesting, it was fun to read.

so fucking cute. auuuuuuuugh. i never did like how the monks treated jack. but i would put that up with the writers thinking it was a funny gag rather than the actual characters doing it...
But well, I guess I could see them being cruel earlier in the series, but I think with the character growth they are SUPPOSED to have, they would stop eventually. ah well. :/

great fic!

i feel so sorry for Fung D:

Aaaawwww! It's so sweet, I'm getting a cavity! I'd give you my thumbs up rating, but I'd need ten times as many thumbs.

awwwwww cute

really good job! jack as a gay faerie... priceless(:

so i have determined that in this universe there is now no xiaolin just lesser and greater heylin

seriously u know how to make people hate the 'good guys'

i was a little surprised that all 4 of them were in on it though

i wouldn't think that clay would and rspecially omi would be okay with this

no matter what the bad guy does submitting him to a slow and painful death when he never even harmed you is too much and any kind of xiaolin pride in themselves should be utterly shattered in do something like this

i liked the concept of jack having hidden magic and the fact that because of it chase got to see what jack could really be like

very well done!_!

Um, wow. Now I am really hating the Xiaolins, and I never do that. You have really displayed the epitome of shamefulness in those brats and I like the light the you always put Jack and Chase into. Keep up the great work!

That was so awesome i'm going to give this story a 200

That was a AWESOME STORY! Genius if I say so myself and I do.:)))) yo have a brilliant future in writing. Do add more to the story, I'd love to to we more definitely. In america I'm bored, I've read man stories and I find them good, but yours was based on more than some fiction; so I hope to keep in touch because I'm looking for someone to make a show with. You just mght fit the part.:))))))

good story its too bad it doesn't have many reviews