You should definitely continue this story ! I love it ! It’s so well written and I completely agree with you about George not ending up with Angelina, it’s a bit strange

Holy- she’s a witch!

This could be a full length story, have you considered extending it? Sooooo good!

I'd like to see more chapters :) I think they'd be a cute couple.

Really love this story idea and your writing style! Keep it up :)

Ah, it sucks that this is a one shot and seeing how old it is, you probably won't be coming back to it but it's really well-written (as all your stories are) and it fits in with the mood I've been in lately. I'd love to have seen it as more than a one shot, but I'm feeling pretty satisfied with it as it is. I agree with the whole Angelina/George relationship, but at least J.K. didn't leave him alone and depressed, y'feel? Sigh, I never know how to end reviews. Cheers?

Well, I've literally been reading every fanfic you've ever written and they're all absolutely brilliant. I was horrified when Fred died. Him and George were my childhood :] So thanks for uh...helping with the grieving? xD But nobody has ever actually tried doing George's life afterword; and i think you're doing a really good job at his reaction right now. And I agree; I don't like the Angelina-George pairing, it doesn't seem right. (teehee Winnie is better). Sorry. You probably won't update this, but if you do...I think we'd all be grateful. You're so talented (Sorry this is huge. I'm desperate for an update :)

this is amazing, please write more. the story already has an incredible perspective with George's experience with the loss of his brother and the girl is mysterious :) no oneshot please

Merlin please add another chapter! I knew it! I knew she was a witch! When I finished I started screaming at my phone. Hehe. But anyways please make this a story :)))

This is a great start to your story! I know it's been 3 years but please update soon if you can! :)

Oh yes PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE add more chapters! :D Maybe make it into a full on story! :)
Haha anyways I really liked this one-shot thingy :3 especially the twist ending! But throughout the whole 'one-shot' I cried like ten times! Which is a good thing ;D And I also really didn't like the George, Angelina pairing so I would really like to see Harlow and George pairing :D

i love it, so write more!

I know it has been a few years since you published this, but IO think it would make a wonderful multi-chapter story. Harlow is a awesome character and I would love to see her and George's relationship grow. :) Just thought I would put it out there. And your writing is beautiful. :)

-IAmTheStars

you should keep writing this!

i really did like this story it was just so down-to-earth, and it was very believable...you have to make just one more chapter if you like because i would love for george to find she's really a witch and they get together :D