Ah this is so cute! It had the right amount of pace which is really rare in stories! I loved how you showed the progress from them meeting to wanting to work out their relationship! There was the moderate amount of drama but the drama was not unexpected. So thank you for making this brilliant story :)

just saying: you meant 'legilimentik" not "okklumentik" when you refrered to Harry Potter and it's mind reading technicmaybe you want to change it, or leave it, whatever you chose to do...

this was warm and comforting chillness, i loved it. good n stable plot, no melodrama or shark jumpin, just nice chill realism bless ya this the kind of centered calm i need amongst all my chaos bless up baby thank u

This was really cute and written so perfectly! I love the development between Morgan and Reid and the youths of the Youth Center. They were really entertaining. I think one of my favorite parts of this was when Morgan recited what Reid had said about the difference between a geek and a nerd XD But such a great magnificent story that had the right balance of emotional parts and humorous ones :) I really love this AU

You have a phenomenal talent, Thank you for sharing :) :) :)

Great story and amazing job with the kids

This is really cute!

Aaaaand... my review decided that it wanted to be posted before I finished it (lol) so, I had to logout and yaddayaddayadda...

So, I was saying, the delightful youths, and Spencer! Oh, how I loved your Spencer! Geeky, shy, but not that much, and decisive when he wanted to. Grr! I one one of those for myself!

Anyway, I wanted to tell you just how much I adored this.

Kudos!

OMG I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!

Yeah, I needed the capital letters. Just, too amazing. Amazing.

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I'm really, really trying to write more, to say more, to... I don't know, I'm not enerely sure about how to say wha is it that I'm feeling right now. I loved your characterizations, I loved the whole idea of this AU! I mean, Morgan leading the youth centre after kicking out Bufford, and all the kids- ehm, youths were delightful (oh, now I really want some Jamie/Nathan xD)

I think this was written so well. Your Spencer and Derek are very much in character and I think that's the crux of a great AU fic. My only wish is that it had gone on a little longer, would have loved a prologue mate showing whatever came of Nathan and Jamie and how Spencer and Derek worked around the BAU. Regardless this was an awesome fic :)

Wow this is so good so much detail so intricate the opening chapter the backward from Spencer and Derek meeting. Awesome "foreplay" Reid lecturing abt Torqemada as he seduced Morgan. Very erotic. Yum. Great story. Only dif Reid has brown hair some blond highlights in some pictures and hazel eyes. They are actually the same height, 6'1" Reid looks taller because he's thinner.

What ever happened to Jamie and Nathan?

I could say a bunch of stuff, but this fits best.

I fan-girl-ed the entire time I was reading.

Amazing story! Really, really good. I don't mind AU fics as long as they manage to sound plausible while incorporating the essence of the characters we love into a different setting. You certaintly accomplish this balance; Reid and Morgan sounded authentic, which I know is ridiculous because we're talking about fiction here, but still, they were recognizable even in this new background.
It doesn't surprise me this story won an award, it's definitely one of the best I've read, and I've been steadily making my way through a very long reading list of criminal minds stories for the last couple of months, so I should know.
Great job and thank you for sharing.

Alexlee-

please finish