That was so rude. :( But really beautifully written. I like how you're not really explicit about What's going on and it's kind of just the backdrop while Yuffie is completely focused on Vincent. Well done.

I hate you! You totally just threw that out of left field. Don't get me wrong; it was beautifully done. My best friend (who is sitting next to me) actually said, "What's wrong? Who just sucked the smile off your face?" So, bravo in getting that dramatic a reaction out of me.

Really sweet, love how you've focused on his voice.

This is heartbreakingly beautiful, again, as is most of your writing. :) I just love this so much. It's depressing, but sweet and lovely at the same time. It's the angst coupled with the love and laughter that makes it so beautiful, even poignant. You have so much talent, I wouldn't change anything about your writing for the world. So keep up the good work! :)

Well that was sad. But undeniably good. But sad. As I interpreted it, and I think I'm correct, she was gravely injured/dying. I'll just imagine that she blacked out and somebody saved her anyway. Much happier that way. XD

M, angst.

M, Vinnie voice.

How could a combination of the two go wrong? Awesome work, Lynners.

AWESOME~!

aw TT_TT so sad.

Aw, I really enjoyed this, it was sad and romantic and funny all at once. I liked how Yuffie says she made herself a moron just to hear him talk. You write tragedy really well. :)