This was incredible! Good plot and very well written!

Whoa, this was a great story! Man, I love the whole case you thought up, and the fact that it takes place at Stanford. The PI was a very cool bonus too. It's so interesting to see the Winchesters through the eyes of soneone who doesn't know what they've been through. So awesome job! :D

I laughed so hard at the ending... but what in the world will the Winchesters do if Fielding turns into a fanboy? :P

I just found this story and it was really good. I espically liked the ending.

is it just my imagination, or do you read dick francis books in your spare time. the names Sid and Fielding are almost dead giveaways. anyway, it was a very good story. I loved how you included the book in the end, and the people are not only very believable, but likeable too.

hahahahaha i love that he left supernatural behind. that was a great story thanks for sharing!

This story needs a sequel! Like the PI runs into something Supernatural, or attends the Fan convention and meets up with S & D again, or something like that. And I totally want to read Sam's essay that got the prof. thinking about him after so many years. Great story!

I loved it, I could totally see Sid shooting the ghost n then makin a run for it n getting absolutely drunk. N the supernatural by Edlund Carver seriously had me laughin my head off, after how freaked put they were after readin the book I can't imagine them giving a copy 2 some. Maybe they should hav signed it 'with love frm the muse' ;p

Anyway I really liked the way you wrote the story, specially the way u managed to insert the professor and sid. I'd been lookin for a fic where Sam life as a hunter met the time or people he met as the 'college student'

Nice fic! hope u read more of ur work.

loved this story :P

Really fun case fic with a cowardly PI on their tale. I seriously thought he was going to go into hunting, until he froze at seeing the ghost.

I liked the way you ended this with one of Chuck's books.

I really enjoyed this!

Wow, I really liked this. Albeit playing so late in the series, it brought me back to the feeling of the early seasons, what with the breaking and entering and evading snooping other people. I liked the original characters you brought into this; they were realistic, likeable, settled, and still made for a nice plot bunny. Though I might have gotten nostalgic, this clearly plays during the last season and I loved how you got the characters to deal with their issues without letting that dominate the story, and how natural the characters developed.

Thumbs up!

That was a really fun fic! :)

I thought the PI guy, Sid, was pretty cool for an authority figure. Usually I just get annoyed of anyone chasing after the boys, but he actually won me over a bit. ;) I think you handled his character really well.

I TOTALLY loved the ending, how Sam left the Carver Edlund book with Sid! lol That made me laugh so hard!

I think it'd be really hard for Sammy to take a case back in Palo Alto. I liked how you handled all of that.

This was a reallly fun read. Thanks!

sgs09

Loved the ending, although I really wanted more... That is the first time I have ever read anybody finding one of the books... Now, did I miss whoever left it? Was it Sam or Dean? Or was it "Chuck"? Love it! Thanks for posting.

I loved the ending of this chapter. What a surprise!