UPDATE?

I know this seems to have been posted a while ago...But still.

And don't worry about your OCs; they're great. Very realistic, nowhere near a Sue. I would tell you, in no uncertain terms, if they were -

So...

UPDATE?

Oh.

Abstract fic is abstract... XD

But I still like the style! I like how you introduce them without overdoing it (i.e., not spending one whole paragraph rambling on and on about them). Yeah!

It ends very nicely, I think. Another chapter might be too long-winded, but... well, 's up to ya! ;D

Trust me, this sort of vagueness is good. Go have them cut up some random genin-level outlaws.

I liked it. It was just vague enough to make one wonder what was really happening.