Reviews for Secret Santa |
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![]() ![]() Surprisingly enough, this was a really cute story! “You complete me”, it said? Just like me and lunch... One tip: when I write a story and the point of views switch, I find it helpful to use third person so we better understand who the character is at the moment. Keep writing, this is very impressive! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WHY CAN'T THIS BE REAL?! ITS PERFECT AND WELL THOUGHT OUT! |
![]() ![]() i need this to happen |
![]() ![]() i ship it so hard...life is so unbearibly cruel |
![]() ![]() I loved it! It was adorable! |
![]() ![]() Awwwwwhhh cuuuute :3 heheheh |
![]() ![]() Just continue please TT |
![]() ![]() ![]() kaoru is bae for me! i love it omg perfect. this is awesome! |
![]() ![]() Aaaawwwww! Love it! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() SO CUTE AND BEAUTIFUL I'M GONNA BAWL no seriously this is really good. 333 |
![]() ![]() Maybe next time you could put what point of view it is Because sometimes it was hard to tell But I loved it |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love this |
![]() ![]() I really liked this story it was very CUTE |
![]() ![]() ![]() that was so cute! |
![]() ![]() Soooooo fluuuuuffy *u* Kawaii, oh so very kawaii |