That was really cute. good job. :)

Oh my gods I love it, it's so sweet and kind of heartbreaking, It's short but it said alot about Luke, Annabeth and Thalia's life on the run.

i really liked this story! i love pre-series fics, and these vignettes are perfect. I'd love to see more.

way too short...but very good.

I love this! I like how you worded it. I can't describe it. its just a type of writing i like. keep writing!