Reviews for The Mighty Pharaoh and The Unruly Slave |
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tmntlover2013 chapter 20 . 6/27/2019 great job on the story, please update it ️ |
Guest chapter 20 . 2/9/2018 Pleeeease update where are youuuuu |
ichigo chapter 20 . 6/17/2017 hi author-san :) it's been a while since you updated. i really enjoyed a lot of your stories. this one has a special place in my heart. hoping you did not drop writing this :) |
kushina410 chapter 20 . 10/23/2016 This is good , why dont you keep going? |
Guest chapter 20 . 8/17/2016 Where is the rest of the story-it has not been Updated since Nov 16, 2012! I really dislike people who write fanfictions and not finish them. You get readers hooked on it and never even finish it off for them and also I dislike how you keep taking out the sex & rape parts of the story. If you were not going to put them in then DO NOT TELL us that you are taking them out! Last but not lease why do you keep saying "Please review. Reviews make my fingers move"-when you do not even read them! |
Imtopaz1988 chapter 20 . 5/17/2016 Love the story hope u keep it up |
YaoiHimeSama chapter 20 . 6/3/2015 I love this story so much! Please update soon, Author-san! I will wait for your new update!(: |
f.k chapter 4 . 11/15/2014 cant find the rape scene anywhere on live journal just ch6 the rape scene would have made this one of the best stories I read, can you write a link of where to find it? |
Guest chapter 20 . 10/1/2014 need...the...continuation... OTL |
Guest chapter 4 . 8/31/2014 Aaand here we go seeing an attention getter just deleting sex scenes because its "explict" Have u seen fanfics where theres intense and well detailed sex which has over thousands of favorites and follows and yet they dont delete the sex scene and put it somewhere else (Im talkin to u bitch). It seems you want other people to look you up in different websites but why the fuck would we? Dont be a pussy as I barely saw anyone saying that one of their stories was deleted because of sex -_-. You could have had up to a thousand favs and follows if u just stoped being a pussy and ruining the moment for us. TOTAL LETDOWN OF THE MONTH |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/11/2014 Why the fuck did u edit out the scene? U just fucked up the whole story... |
Guest chapter 11 . 3/25/2014 put the damn smuts please |
Psychedelic0Kitty chapter 20 . 2/15/2014 Loving this so far Please update soon:-) |
cary99 chapter 1 . 2/9/2014 Love it |
hikora chapter 20 . 2/3/2014 Ho! I wonder what will happen next. Please continue. |