This story made me cry FOUR TIMES!

It's such a beautiful piece of writing that complements EVERYTHING!
10 out of 10!

Every time I read this I come away with something different (it drives me nuts because I want to find the RIGHT interpretation [silly me]). But this time I was thinking of pan’s labyrinth instead of jareth. Shinichi as the main character who has a chance to return to the fairy realm if he makes the right choice and kid as the supernatural creature who offers it to him. Except kid won’t accept a wrong choice (and that just gives the story so many more twisty options). Thank you for writing this!

Love this ! I would love a sequel thugh, or Kids point of view...

This story is myterous and exciting! Please continue this story!
or make a squel! Please!

please update.

This is interesting... Did Ran die and Shinichi blames himself? What will happen when Shinichi goes with Kaito? Is Kaito also dead or merely presumed dead? Please continue this story!

You know, that was a beautiful piece of writing... But I have no idea what it was about.
Weird experience.

Mysterious

I love this story!
Do you think you would ever consider doing a squel?
Thanx!

This is really well written and wanting more. Write a sequel? Or maybe a prequel to show how Shinichi got that way? Please? I really liked this :3

Me oh my.. What a.. Darkish story.

I am left with a lot of questions, and only few answers to this story. What has made Shinichi soo.. Sad? Soo.. Lost? -Ish.

It could look like he did something against the laws.. The way Kaito (Uuh, dark!) speaks and all that. Makes one think that.

So please, tell me what has happened? xD

Or even better! Make a sequel! Or a prequel, though sequel would be better. One, where all this gets explained.. A story, which takes place right after this one. Or a day after.. Or something. Please? Pretty please..?

Well, anyway, wonderful work! :D As written, a very dark fic, somehow, but also.. Fascinating. Splendid work, really.

'Til next time! :D

~ Nathalaia ~

Oh, god.

This is terribly beautiful in a stark, frightening sort of way. Shinichi's alienation and despair bleed through clearly in every word, and the style (somewhat more ornate than your usual) matches the haunting dreamlike quality of the story well. Shinichi scared me here (most of all when Kaito took his gun-the realization that he had a gun on him the whole time, maybe even always, and the /blood stains on his coat/! D8), but Kaito really took the creepy factor up to eleven. His behavior is so ambiguous in this story that it's hard to reconcile this Kid with the canon Kuroba Kaito. What could have happened to turn him this cold? Does he care about Shinichi as more than a symbol? It could be interpreted either way...

Brilliant, fascinating work. I don't suppose there might be a sequel...?

Wow... That's deep. I feel so bad for poor Shinichi... Nice writing though. -

WTF?

But, it's AMAZING!

I just love the feeling and all of it!

I am sure I've already read this, but effectively I left no review (I'm so bad xD). Well, I'm sure you got it a few times but it's really sad. Poor Shinichi, everything turned like s**t to him, huh?

Just a guess- is he dead? and did he commit suicide? I mean, the stains, the gun, he feeling so miserable, not caring about anything, also feeling a failure, KID's comments... were they hints? Did I get them totally wrong? haha

Anyway, great job.