Reviews for The Third Time
Sakuragane San chapter 2 . 1/15/2019
You know, I'm fine with stories that are half-abandoned or on hiatus, as long as they keep the chapters up. But this makes me go, WHYYYYY! Seriously though, after going through the comments and knowing there were 13 more chapters, I want to know what happens/ed even more!

But I guess I'll have to respect your decision... as much as I don't like it.
Might be better to tag this with 'Complete'.
Another chapter 1 . 12/14/2014
This is really beautiful. It's short, but not in a bad way. It's like one of those fancy restaurants with extremely small portions or a priceless abstract painting with not much going on in it. I love your story. It may be the best fanfiction I've read.
southparkyaoifan chapter 2 . 5/1/2012
really your stoping this loks liek ti coudl eb an amazing story and its my OTP
MizukiCheese-kun chapter 2 . 4/18/2011
WHYYYYYYYYYY. D: I adored this story greatly, and now... It's just a oneshot. :( sad me.
compa16 chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
Sad
NixieGirl21 chapter 2 . 1/12/2011
...WAT TEH HELL! YOUR FIC WAZ AWESOME! Y TEH HELL DID YOU DELETE IT!
bladedfanfighter chapter 14 . 12/19/2010
Good luck in Texas! :D
bladedfanfighter chapter 7 . 12/19/2010
One, I am absolutely loving this. Beautiful so far. Two, I generally hate girls too. Man, I can definitely see where you're coming from.
PlusSurLeSite chapter 14 . 11/22/2010
AngstyNotInnocent!Canada. I love it.

I hope to read new chapters soon because I really want Gilbert to know about Matthew's otherkindofjobs and tell him that he doesn't hate him (well, it might not be as simple as that but still.)

Thanks a lot for writing this far ! It's a great work, and really well written.
Ceri Moriarty chapter 14 . 11/5/2010
UPDATE PLEASE~ IT'S BEEN OVER THREE MONTHS, DAMNIT.

I wanna read more of the awesome angsty PruCan-ness please~
XxIcy-NekoxX chapter 1 . 11/1/2010
love this story soooooo much~ it made me prucan fan totally hahaha :) luv ur storiesssssss!
lunareclipse3 chapter 11 . 10/2/2010
Grrr...I really need to slap Mattie right now. Like, really. But thank Yong Soo Im for inserting your awesomeness in a place that it wasn't even needed.

...the above sentence is quite awkward, isn't it?

~Lunar
lunareclipse3 chapter 10 . 10/2/2010
:l Oh, mon cher Matthieu. Pourquoi? Pourquoi? Vous êtes presque pire que cette jeune fille sourde dans celui BBC film réalisé pour la télévision. Pourquoi êtes-vous un tel manwhore!

Apologies. Me getting emotional stuff in French. As much as it annoyed me I seriously have to love you for starting the chapter the way you did. Mattie is a Gary Stu in this no doubt but I'm kind of loving him for that :P

Super German Gilbert FTW.

Oh and um SQUEE at the end. Yes, much squee.

~Lunar
lunareclipse3 chapter 9 . 10/2/2010
"Go into my room again and you'll wish that I truly didn't know how to use a rope!"

Do I see Germancest in my immediate future? Only in my dreams...okay back to th point. Liked this chapter because, whoa, look at that, you're one of the few (only?) people that have addressed the brother's...um...sexuality. No one ever does and that annoys me. But you did. So yah! Bromance is win :)

~Lunar
lunareclipse3 chapter 7 . 10/2/2010
I...am a girl who hates girls when they are places they should not be. I.e. places with yaoi, places that yaoi happen, places that should have yaoi but they get in the way of my awesome dude-on-dude-ness. yaoi. Especially when it's a group of guys and one girl. (Damn you Anthony Horowitz with the Power of Five.)

But anyway this fic intrigues me. I could so see Mattie committing suicide. I like how everything's written, it's all very... developed. What I mean is everything comes together in the chapters, unlike a LOT of stories. I.e. mine. And I like Gil's character. He's not just a pervy drunk (but really, we don't mind that, do we?)

Matthew seems to have handled getting raped very well o.O Did you say that was the 2ND time?

~Lunar
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