I WEEP FOR LENNOX ,but damn PROWL is the BOSS, lol this fic killed me

I love this. And if there's a two-parter/sequal I want to read it!

Hey just a note, you keep using 'servo' to stand for 'hand' or 'foot' for Autobots, and I don't think it means what you think it means-I keep picturing some kind of cog, and I'm pretty sure its actually else...but NOT something like a hand or a foot. Things like 'optics' I can get behind, but I think it'd be fine-and much less jarring-if you just called them 'hands' and 'feet'. And arms and legs can be 'limbs'.

LOL!

Ugh! I hate MRE's! My school once decided to serve them on memorial day, and I got one with a chocolate bar in it. The thing was so hard that when I slammed it against the table, the wood cracked! True story, swear to Primus.

ROTFL! Absolutely adored this! Very well written!

I totally look forward to reading your other fics.

Laughs and giggles everywhere throughout this one, LOL. It was so hilariously awkward, poor Will! Having to deal with all of this 'interfacing'. I really liked Arcee's explanation for all that, though; it makes them seem even more... human, for a lack of a better term xD

Loved this! 8D

Poor Major Lennox. Will it ever stop being embarrassing for him? *giggles* I think Sarah and Mikaela are having a lot of fun teasing their men. :D But beautiful picture there at the end, with the sentences: "There were grass-stains on his doors and he was surrounded by Arcee's three bikes. The blue one leaned against his passenger door, the purple one was touching his driver's side back panel, and the pink one was pressing against his front bumper. Cuddling. Autobot alt-forms cuddling." This is just so sweet with Arcee and 'Bee. Thanks for wrapping the story up like that.

I absolutely loved the way Arcee explained to Will what interfacing – apart from using up excess spark-energy – means for Cybertronians. It makes me jealous that between 'bots there can be such a high level of trust and intimacy, something we humans may never acquire. It's just really beautiful. And the more fun that Arcee is lashing out at Ratchet, Prime and her sister and Ironhide. :D But Chromia and Ironhide staring at each other while in the brig, totally ignoring Will, is funny as well, especially the part where Ironhide sort of blackmails Will with his knowledge about Sarah having visited Will at their anniversary. *sniggers* Wonderful chapter. Loved it!

*sniggers* Wheeljack is possibly hilarious. The way he keeps asking 'why' when Will isn't able to explain properly… And the way he grew all excited that Earth has 'wild' weather day in and out… You gotta love Wheeljack. And poor Will when Optimus and he talked about Arcee's problem and how to solve it. Awesome.

ROTFLM(non-Cybertronian)AO Sarah playing peeking Tom and Will discussing the birds and bees with Ratchet. :'D

And this paragraph just gives this story the last pointer to more-than-just-mega-awesomeness:

"His next order of business was sitting through a second, tortuous briefing by Prowl. (On Will’s personal scale, one briefing a day by Prowl was brutal, two was tortuous, and three was a violation of the Geneva Convention. If he ever had a day where Prowl scheduled a fourth briefing, Will swore he’d go find Megatron’s front door and ring the bell.) The enforcer had tried to explain the basics of Autobot intimacy, but the presentation was so technical (complete with a very graphics-heavy Powerpoint – what was his obsession with Powerpoints?) that Will couldn’t follow half of it. A lecture on ‘bot-sex was bad enough, but a birds-and-bees briefing by PROWL was a horror beyond words."

'Nuff said. *holds tummy, hurting after another laughing fit* And of course, we mustn't forget poor Will trying to write a report. That cursor I could curse sometimes as well. ;)

You have no idea how much this last chapter made me smile purely because of Bee and Arcee. I think its, um c

cute...

I read the Annabelle one first, so reading this one is major LOL!

Poor, poor Will. Yet his suffering is hysterical xD

Lol!Nice job you got there,Will!ROFL!

Here's an analogy: WheeljackAnnoying Orange with a !

Prowl?Is dr. Phil?Heheh,nice one.

And Ratchet,don't leave out the romantic details when talking about 'bot-sex to like River are like us old fashioned consider sex as a sacred act of intimacy and openly displaying it in public is like being a spawn from Sodom and sex is meaningless,but add a lot of love,honor,humility and patience,it becomes more.

Prime,i'm ashamed of 't relate your previous sexual experiences so sensitive about River's feelings,okay?

Optimus:i will take that under advicement...

River,you did good browbeating those insensitive you and 'Bee hit it of me know when you decide to marry .

To Gen. Morshower,take care of your fellow JCS members,okay?'nough said!Lol!

Great .Ü

I love it! (it reminds me of high school)

But I love it anyways.

Eve