It's nice to see Fred in relationship. It just doesn't flow like behind these eyes did. Please update though. Your works are still one off the Best I've read.

This is really good! I can't wait for the next chapter.

I think you should update...soon :)

"You're family now."

"Thanks, Mum."

when i read this i thought Ally had decided to call Molly Mum

ohoops

Its so sad yet cheerful ... Wierd

Aww! I love this story sooo much! Keep on writing chicka your doing great! 3

Write more for I await the next chapter with baited breath.

I love the characterization of Bill and defiantly approve of the obnoxiousness of Fleur

Update soon please, even though it's been almost 11 months. Love the story.

~Oz

I need more of this story! It's amazing!

I love this story! I've been looking for a good Fred or George story, and I'm so glad that I found this one! My name is Allison, too, and I wish that this would happen to me! Please update! I need more of Ally/Fred!

EXCELLENT Chapters. (i've been behind sorry!) but i'm enjoying the story thus far. Though it is very sad that it could have been Ally who died. ;(

Haha, brilliant! Love Ally's reactions, they're so perfect!

Can't wait for updates!

XlinzX

Best Fred/OC story I've ever read. You are an amazing writer, keep up the great work!

of course im still enjoying it! lol this is a extremely good story. i really hope you dont kill off fred, like JK did in the books, or ally, because that would really suck! lol but if you did i would understand... i wouldnt be happy, but id understand. do what you gotta do to keep the cannon going. _

So amazing! Seeing it through Ally's eyes was wonderful, of course; especially the part where the Leaky Cauldron sort of materialized in front of her when Fred told her what it was. So cool.

Well, I'm all caught up! Which makes me both happy and sad that I can't immediately go to the next chapter. So you should, you know, update soon:)

Great job! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Squid