A moment while I recover from maximum shock. *Realizing mouth is hanging wide open* So... yeah. That was - like - terrifyingly sad.

I liiiiked this story. It was great. You expressed their feelings clearly making them come to life. :) Like I said it was good.

nice

a 10 on the cutie scale! good job! :-)

so sweet

im really glad he was only dreaming.

This was a nice little story. The beginning attach scene was very vivid. I liked how they fit together and she spent the night with him because he was scared.

I think it would have helped to have a bit more background for the story. Like, what made this case especially frightening? Why is he having nightmares now? Why was Nancy in the room?

Keep writing!

Aw. Love it.